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|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|Unbelievable STeve...Deeply touching~! :) You have it in you, to take it EVERywhere and to EVERyone... Love it! I've seen your Soul through this Poem, as many others too- Adam and Eve under Venus and Mars.. Hmmm.. Wow... a Match made in Heaven- HuGs,SheeeOXO...|
|Reviewed by Joyce Hale
|Beautiful verse, Steven!! Your words are like balm to a searching heart.
>>But watching us that one unblinking eye
Seems sympathetic to our love somehow
As now the silver velvet fog flows in
To clothe our nakedness which knows no sin>>
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|You have done it again Steve, wrapped a velvet blanket of words under one very strong line "Adam and Eve under Venus and Mars. Think I could borrow the book with these superb lines? lol just kidding, great write my friend.