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Under the Canopy
by +Steven Curtis Lance

Monday, May 23, 2005
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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"Under the canopy under the moon / Clad in a shining cloud sparkled with stars / Lover and loved one as one to be soon / Adam and Eve under Venus and Mars"


Transcendental Sonnet #1385:
Under the Canopy

who will join me this fair night?

Full moon night-blooming jasmine-scented sky
Stars fade discreetly to the background now
But watching us that one unblinking eye
Seems sympathetic to our love somehow

As now the silver velvet fog flows in
To clothe our nakedness which knows no sin
Bearing on tiptoes whispered secrecy
Caressed beneath the moonbeams you and me
By sweet delights of night in harmony
Far as the eye of our full moon can see

Under the canopy under the moon
Clad in a shining cloud sparkled with stars
Lover and loved one as one to be soon
Adam and Eve under Venus and Mars

+Steven Curtis Lance



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Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G 5/24/2005
Unbelievable STeve...Deeply touching~! :) You have it in you, to take it EVERywhere and to EVERyone... Love it! I've seen your Soul through this Poem, as many others too- Adam and Eve under Venus and Mars.. Hmmm.. Wow... a Match made in Heaven- HuGs,SheeeOXO...
Reviewed by Joyce Hale 5/23/2005
Beautiful verse, Steven!! Your words are like balm to a searching heart.
>>But watching us that one unblinking eye
Seems sympathetic to our love somehow
As now the silver velvet fog flows in
To clothe our nakedness which knows no sin>>

Exquisite! Peace.

Reviewed by Felix Perry 5/23/2005
You have done it again Steve, wrapped a velvet blanket of words under one very strong line "Adam and Eve under Venus and Mars. Think I could borrow the book with these superb lines? lol just kidding, great write my friend.

Felix
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