the Gold awaits
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Monday, May 23, 2005
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Hidden deep within earths atmosphere,
there's a fortune in gold.
it's right out where everyone can see.
In order to find it,
one needs only to open their heart and mind.
The key has only four letters,
God gave the key to all,
it exists right out in the open.
Each and everyday,
fortune hunters stumble over it,
they do not know its value.
It can't be spent,
we can't pay the rent.
You can't put it in your pocket
or your bank account,
it can be used to fill the heart and soul,
then all the rest falls in place,
love, peace and happiness.
We can't even purchase these with,
a kings fortune.
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|Reviewed by Jeff Mason
|So true - material wealth can evaporate in an instant, but true wealth lies deep within the heart that loves unconditionally. -- Jeff|
|Reviewed by Handsum Hart
|written with a golden tipped pen
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|G I think this is one of your best.|
|Reviewed by Cathrine Hottran
|yes truly excellent written!|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Excellent work here Grady...thanks for sharing mate!!
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|great write, grady! thank you for the sharing; very well done! bravo!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Sue Hess
|this reminds me of that old song from the billy jack movie...does anyone remember the one i'm talking about, a young girl sang about the treasure on the mountain?|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|More Grady wisdom to fuel my day!WTG!
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|it can be used to fill the heart and soul
And what a marvelous treasure it is when one does just that, Grady.