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| Reviewed by Sandra Mushi |
5/31/2005 |
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Excellent write and so true, Cynth'ya "... death reveals all they hide under prejudice, pride, it is time to decide: why do we pay to walk? why don't they pay to ride?" Its not for us to judge.
God bless,
Sandie.
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| Reviewed by Eddie Thompson |
5/30/2005 |
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| Justice has her day in the equity of the grave....Great poem, my friend. |
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| Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic |
5/26/2005 |
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well written..
Vesna* |
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| Reviewed by Safi Abdi |
5/25/2005 |
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<why do we pay to walk?
why don't they pay to ride?>
Very well expressed poem, Cynthiya
Say it just like it is...
say no to hypocracy and say it loud...I'm right beside you:)
Safi
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| Reviewed by Nordette Adams |
5/24/2005 |
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Yes, someone was telling me about this. When will it stop? I wonder if they also don't sell condoms to men? Do they check the connections of their banks to see if they're invested in companies that that adhere to practices with which they disagree?
Many of these outward shows of godliness are nothing but messianic-complex masturbation by ego-tripping self-righteous exhibitionists. Why don't they truly relieve themselves of hard decisions, stop selling pharmaceuticals, and go teach children in inner city schools or the forgotten rural poor? Why don't they donate the profits from their drug stores thus far to the local homeless shelter, be done with it all, and work to better the foster care system since they're concerned about babies? Hmmmm. Oh, noooo. Give up the money! Nooooo. It says right there on the dollar in God they trust and so they keep him in their pockets and their banks and waste our time with birth control pill distribution squabbles while people are dying in the streets. We all know that God is far more concerned about babies who have not been conceived and embryos than the ones we can already see with the eyes in our head. Or to paraphrase and borrow the logic of I John 4:20, how can anyone claim concern for unborn humans they cannot see when they care so little for the ones already born that they can see?
Why do we continue to think that God needs our help to stone people? I could've sworn Jesus cleared this up when the men gathered to stone one woman and he stopped them? And the decision to sin or not sin again was left with her. Not the men. Great poem, Cyth'ya! |
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| Reviewed by E. Richardson |
5/24/2005 |
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| Outstanding write! |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
5/24/2005 |
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Cynth'ya,
You pull no punches and make no apologies for getting to the heart of the matter--an excellent, sobering write.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :( |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
5/24/2005 |
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More Like James Bond Movies--Live N Let Die--Why I Love Brits Movies Bloody Bloke Right On With Humour,i.e. Me Not 1 For Humour_
Sad You Pay Them To Ride You To Death_
Unique N Different Done Good...
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
5/24/2005 |
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You have a way of getting past the crap and straight to the truth...outstanding write Cynth'ya!
Peace and love, Carole |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
5/24/2005 |
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We should all live and let live. Who are we to judge others?
Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Hale |
5/24/2005 |
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Cynth'ya, you have exposed a truth not often faced by many....
>>still the rich can't deny
in the sweet by and by
that equality lies
in the grave
side by side>>
Since we are all equal, and you can't take it with you, why not share! Thanks.
Peace.
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
5/24/2005 |
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Excellently stated Cynthya, very powerful poem,
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
5/23/2005 |
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| Well said. |
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| Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine |
5/23/2005 |
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| Truth! Excellent write. R |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
5/23/2005 |
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Excellent poem Cynth'ya!
Eileen |
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