When the Heart is Pure (poem) by Antoinette Kopperfield on AuthorsDen

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When the Heart is Pure by Antoinette Kopperfield Wednesday, May 25, 2005 Rated "G" by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan
I begin to see the white robe of divine light as it engulfs my soul and heals my mind... I am one with truth- and it... is a start down the road of consciousness- lost somwhere between past fathoms when I was blinded by grey sorrows I am here to breathe once more... like dolphins led to their mother's milk- Forsake not... when time stands still for it is meant to arrive when the heart is pure...

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Reviewed by Kate Clifford	5/26/2005

Very insightful.




Reviewed by Felix Perry	5/25/2005

Touching write that offers your passionate hope that tomorrow will always offer something better for the believer. Well written and heartfelt I am sure. Felix




Reviewed by Saul Logan	5/25/2005

Wow, just comes across with a feeling of complete peace. Wonderful write.




Reviewed by George Carroll	5/25/2005

The light at the end of the tunnel leads to a brighter day, an Epiphany.




Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado	5/25/2005

wonderful write, well done, antoinette! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D




Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle	5/25/2005

"I am here to breathe like dolphins led to their mother's milk" -- what a brilliant, metaphoric line, Antoinette. Life is much kinder to us when we let go and breathe. Thanks for sharing, Jill




Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen	5/25/2005

let us banish time! love this, Antoinette. best, carolyn