Honoring the Moon
by Richard Christopher Criso Suarez
Wednesday, May 25, 2005
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I wrote this really fast ...I am sure
I can enhance it.........but I wanted
to place here for now.
HONORING THE MOON
Heavenly Father of the human heart, for
of every great beauty you are,
the biggest part;
You made the universe and it bloomed,
and among the first of all was the Moon;
When the moon is full one cannot ignore,
Artists gather on the shores in awe ,
hoping later to capture what they saw,
Lovers loving one another all the more;
When the Moon is full, one can almost
feel the pull of it's light,
on the darkest night , seems to suggest
lie down and rest and never should you fear,
For the bright ,closest star isn't far ....it' near.
Jesus love save the day',
copyright 2005 © Rich Suarez
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|Reviewed by Mary Lynn Plaisance
|I love a FULL moon and this poem sends that FULL moon honor!|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
A mesmerizing picture enhanced by your beautiful words--Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Wonderful tribute to the moon :-)|
|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|The picture is mesmerizing, and so is this poem.
Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
|I love this, and the pic is beautiful, as is the poetry...
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Very well done...I get moonstruck too...love this!!
Keep up the great work!!
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
The contents of this poem are poetic lights.
"The Moon" can be devloped into a masterpiece if a revision
is made to polish it.
I enjoyed reading "The Moon".
You have the tools, the gifts, the heart and the mind to etch Your
poetic name on the doors of eternity. Please, never rest Your pen.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Londis Carpenter
|great start now get to work and finish it. This is too good to not develop|