use to be Problem (poem) by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper on AuthorsDen

A story of a young girl's search for answers to what happened to her mother. As she unravels the mystery,..

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use to be Problem by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper Thursday, May 26, 2005 Rated "G" by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan
Just a thought in the head, problem gone dead. Still here, but no more fear, gone away, not here. Yesterday seem so far away, the problem has went the same way. In my mind close, but it has crumbled like toast. Earlier times it had me, couldn't figure a solution free. The sunrises in a different light, with a vision of different sight. In the sunset, there's no more regret. All during my day of existing, life is less twisting. G

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Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic	5/26/2005

life is less twisting. ...poignant line.. thought provoking poem...like it..saved it..ty! vesna*




Reviewed by Regina Pounds	5/26/2005

Wonderful description of a troubled life...and the gaining of perspective...serenity near. Love it, dear G. Gina




Reviewed by Dave Harm	5/26/2005

Excellent, I think you'll understand how thrilling it is to live a "boring" life...




Reviewed by E T Waldron	5/26/2005

It seems we learn by the minute, sometimes. Excellent write once again G! L&P Eileen




Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado	5/26/2005

i love it, grady! keep on writing!! well done! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D




Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)	5/26/2005

Grady you sure know how to pen them. You do them so well too.