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If You Could Feel What I Feel by Shezray Faisal Saturday, May 28, 2005 Rated "G" by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan

If you knew the hurt If you knew the pain... If you would feel the incrediblity Of situations you've put me in, If you could feel the surprised tears Trickling from stunned eyes, If you could feel the quiet storm Achingly brewing inside... If you would know the patient fear Of loving and keep loving, How tired a heart can feel Braving & trying ...trying & braving

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Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi	9/20/2005

What a deep beauty! Your words will be with me for a long time.




Reviewed by Muhammad Ali Panhwar	9/6/2005

Whao! What a lovely set of words reflecting the emotions from inside. Wonderful write.




Reviewed by Masood Lohar	7/6/2005

"Patient fear", "surprised tears" It is a very powerful write.




Reviewed by Ghuffran Ullah (Reader)	6/23/2005

The continous struggle of trying to keep up with the roller coaster of emotions in our daily batles with our surroundings is a part of makes us human. remember what you said if not today then someday ...




Reviewed by Regis Auffray	5/29/2005

"Of loving and keep loving, How tired a heart can feel" I can relate most intensely with these verses and to the whole poem. Thank you for sharing it, Shezray. Love and peace to you. Regis




Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G	5/29/2005

Never give up Shezray- Keep the Faith! This is a really nice poem- HuGs,Sheee




Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado	5/28/2005

wonderful write, shezray! well done! (((HUGS))) and love, a friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :D