|Reviewed by Sandra Mushi
|It truly is sad. Can't imagine what it would be like to be in his shoes. You have nothing and worse yet, you have no one! Well penned, Roger!
|Reviewed by Bob Holt (Reader)
|Really well written. I've been there at times. Now I don't get invited to parties or anywhere else.
|Reviewed by A PAX
sounds like someone i know..........
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Gut touching write!|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|this scenario is commonplace in NY ...
i like the raw feel amd imagery of this poem ...
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Been there done all of that, except for maybe extreme drugs that you have to shoot, could never do that to myself...but lived out there and know what love can do and what will happen if he never finds it...RUFUZ and ed|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Well written Roger!!
|Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
|"but mostly someone to love him"
You can't bottle it, sell it, shoot up with it or swallow it (well, maybe you can swallow it) but that's the remedy, tried and true.
Roger, You mix the harsh and the tender and your voice is true. katy xox
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Some have to test the edge of life, and some fall off. Good write.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|In a world that concentrates on looks and things, where skin and success are the most sought,we can't help but see the kind of character you describe. Like Sherry said society fails to address
the cause. The cause is mostly a lack of reverence for Creator.
Therefor respect for creation is minimal. Your excellent poem
stirred my senses;-)
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|Somewhere along the way, we as a society seem to fail these people. They have no morals, no honor, they don't know the feeling of satisfaction of a job well done, they have no regard for themselves or anyone else. How sad it would be to live like that with no feelings of self-respect or self-worth. It is a life filled with nothing.