|Reviewed by D.L. Tanner
|I know exactly what you mean...thank you. D.L. Tanner|
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Very nice write. You are so intuitive.
|Reviewed by Cryssa C
|This poem conjures up images of poetry, but also of that perfect word that is on the tip of your tongue when you are trying to communicate with someone...that word that would clarify your point perfectly...but that you can't seem to find. :~)
|Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
|A well written poem,excellent piece,take care
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|Of course, it surprises me not, another beautiful which is.
|Reviewed by Peter Adotey Addo
|Enjoyed reading your work . Reads very well .And a powerful technique of communicating your message .Thank you for sharing.|
|Reviewed by M Flack
|So many words, so little rime. Or should that be rhyme?
Great write. So much in so few words...
|Reviewed by Barbara Terry
|Sis as always you write with vigor that comes only from inside. This is great as usual. The beautiful that is, comes from those that read our works and are entertained by them. I so agree with Thunderduck, that glory is never ours. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, stubborn to a fault, joy tot he world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little terrified sister, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I may as wel be."
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This is perfect! Loved your poem here!
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Superb poetry, Lori. Thank you for sharing this magnificent offering. Love and peace to you. Regis|
|Reviewed by D May (Reader)
|Wonderful Lori. Loved this title.|
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|Now, this is a gem, Lori!|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|yep, i couldn't have said it better ...|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
You in my head or somethin'?? You capture it, spot ON! LOL
Well done--enjoyed this one!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|You have one beautiful mind plus face.......
Very creative Lori......
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|No glory Lori..
Well just have fun fun fun, Mrs Perry Mason..
|Reviewed by Emeka Nwogu
|Profoundly written, Lori. Poetry with rhyme and rhythm amount to nothing. Perfection is always sought after in every poem. This is well written.
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|... except in your case, Lori, where even the "ones that got away" mutate into the "ones saved and immortalised in transformation"! Deft and stylish and misleadingly "simple"... this is triumph not tragedy! Luv it! Kate xx|
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|The perfect word, the perfect verse always escapes
us no matter what it seems. Great write!
|Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
|Excellent subject matter handled expertly, Lori. I really enjoyed this. Dawn|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|How well we can all emphazize with this poem and the lost that from time to time as you say in your poem befalls all writers. Loose your attention for a second by a phone call or door bell and they are lost forever. and yes some of the words we lose could make a difference between a poem and a great poem.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|How true this can be!!
Smiles...enjoy your day!!
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Been there.......this morning.....I awoke realizing I had forgotten a perfect poem that had come to my mind through the night full of insight......I must learn to not worry about sleep so much LOL.|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
|Unique N Different Done Good Write!
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|Laffin!! How true this is, Lori. My most inspired moments happen at 60 MPH on the freeway with no way to commit them to paper..sigh. It was so clear and so profound but it got lost somewhere before the offramp. Great write and one I can totally identify with.
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|thought moving Lori,|
|Reviewed by Janet Parker
|We all experience those times, but no one could have expressed the dilemma better than you. Eloquent poem, Lori.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Lori this is another example of your astute mind! I'm glad the word perfection isn't missing, I need it for this poem!