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A Beautiful Might Have Been
by Lori L Moore

Sunday, May 29, 2005
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That perfect word, now gone.
It fit so well between this and that.
How could it have been lost?

The potential beauty of rhythm and rhyme
forever destined to dwell as a fragrant vapor.
A beautiful might have been.

The ultimate image, lost
in the moment of a misfired synapse.

It was there, so clear,
screaming its significance
begging for a pen to validate it’s glory…

But no glory comes…

The everyday joy of a poet…
   

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Reviewed by Deleted Account 7/13/2009
I know exactly what you mean...thank you. D.L. Tanner
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 6/20/2009
Very nice write. You are so intuitive.

Anna
Reviewed by Cryssa C 6/17/2009
This poem conjures up images of poetry, but also of that perfect word that is on the tip of your tongue when you are trying to communicate with someone...that word that would clarify your point perfectly...but that you can't seem to find. :~)
Well written!
Cryssa :~)
Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle 6/6/2009
A well written poem,excellent piece,take care

EDWIN
Reviewed by Amor Sabor 1/4/2008
Of course, it surprises me not, another beautiful which is.
Amor
Reviewed by Peter Adotey Addo 2/24/2007
Enjoyed reading your work . Reads very well .And a powerful technique of communicating your message .Thank you for sharing.
Reviewed by M Flack 2/15/2007
So many words, so little rime. Or should that be rhyme?

Great write. So much in so few words...
Reviewed by Barbara Terry 6/12/2005
Sis as always you write with vigor that comes only from inside. This is great as usual. The beautiful that is, comes from those that read our works and are entertained by them. I so agree with Thunderduck, that glory is never ours. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, stubborn to a fault, joy tot he world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little terrified sister, Barbie

"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I may as wel be."
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 6/11/2005
This is perfect! Loved your poem here!

Reindeer
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 6/5/2005
Superb poetry, Lori. Thank you for sharing this magnificent offering. Love and peace to you. Regis
Reviewed by D May (Reader) 6/5/2005
Wonderful Lori. Loved this title.
Reviewed by Nordette Adams 6/1/2005
Now, this is a gem, Lori!
Reviewed by jude forese 5/31/2005
yep, i couldn't have said it better ...
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 5/31/2005
Lori,

You in my head or somethin'?? You capture it, spot ON! LOL

Well done--enjoyed this one!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 5/30/2005
You have one beautiful mind plus face.......
Very creative Lori......
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 5/30/2005
No glory Lori..
Well just have fun fun fun, Mrs Perry Mason..
Reviewed by Emeka Nwogu 5/30/2005
Profoundly written, Lori. Poetry with rhyme and rhythm amount to nothing. Perfection is always sought after in every poem. This is well written.

Emeka
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 5/30/2005
... except in your case, Lori, where even the "ones that got away" mutate into the "ones saved and immortalised in transformation"! Deft and stylish and misleadingly "simple"... this is triumph not tragedy! Luv it! Kate xx
Reviewed by Dale Clark 5/30/2005
The perfect word, the perfect verse always escapes
us no matter what it seems. Great write!
Reviewed by Dawn Richerson 5/30/2005
Excellent subject matter handled expertly, Lori. I really enjoyed this. Dawn
Reviewed by Felix Perry 5/29/2005
How well we can all emphazize with this poem and the lost that from time to time as you say in your poem befalls all writers. Loose your attention for a second by a phone call or door bell and they are lost forever. and yes some of the words we lose could make a difference between a poem and a great poem.

Felix
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 5/29/2005
How true this can be!!

Smiles...enjoy your day!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 5/29/2005
Been there.......this morning.....I awoke realizing I had forgotten a perfect poem that had come to my mind through the night full of insight......I must learn to not worry about sleep so much LOL.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 5/29/2005
Et tu?
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 5/29/2005
Unique N Different Done Good Write!

TRASK
Reviewed by Sherry Heim 5/29/2005
Laffin!! How true this is, Lori. My most inspired moments happen at 60 MPH on the freeway with no way to commit them to paper..sigh. It was so clear and so profound but it got lost somewhere before the offramp. Great write and one I can totally identify with.
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 5/29/2005
thought moving Lori,
Reviewed by Janet Parker 5/29/2005
We all experience those times, but no one could have expressed the dilemma better than you. Eloquent poem, Lori.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 5/29/2005
Lori this is another example of your astute mind! I'm glad the word perfection isn't missing, I need it for this poem!

Eileen
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