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Alzheimer's
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Tuesday, May 31, 2005
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Fictional, yet based on experiences with patients that have Alzheimer's.


ancient visages of ghosts
wander the haunted attic
of his mind
dragging chains of memories
made rusty by time's passage
down the stairs
i yell at them to "shut up!"
as he yammers in their voice
he flinches
it's as if i have slapped him
he dances with alzheimer's
i'm ashamed

(c) 2005, Karla Dorman.

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Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson 3/15/2008
Hi,, its hard to dael with some one who has this hofiffic disease.. Pease post this again ...NOW......M
Reviewed by Michelle Mills 6/3/2005
My Grandma died of Alzheimer's 4 years ago. It was a horrific decline. You have described this well, with an economy of words. Excellent write my friend...Michelle
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 6/1/2005
So powerful and sad.....good write!
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 6/1/2005
Quite powerful, Karla - I've sadly known some folks with Alzheimer's too, and it truly is a devastating disease.
Reviewed by F William Broome 6/1/2005
Most really great works, rhyming or not, are the ones which are brief. They make you feel cheated after reading them, because you want so much for the poet to tell you more in that lyrical language you've had poured over you. Losing my father to this horror, taught me much. You know your subject, and have done very well with it. Are you a health provider professional? Thank you. - Bill
Reviewed by m j hollingshead 6/1/2005
powerful read: alzheimer's is a harsh reality in the lives of so many and their families
Reviewed by E. Richardson 5/31/2005
good, very good, Lady Buckeye.
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 5/31/2005
This one really hit home
Excellent
God Bless
Michelle!
Reviewed by Lori Moore 5/31/2005
Excellent!
Reviewed by Roger Ochs 5/31/2005
" i'm ashamed"

Don't be. You atoned quite nicely by writing this.
Reviewed by Felix Perry 5/31/2005
My mil who lives with us suffers from this terrible disease and it is one of the unkindest diseases I know of. It doesn't just rob you of your life it robs you of all dignity. I watched a sweet grey haired little old lady of 86 who never said an angry word since I met her scream cruelties at her daughter that made me cry. Good Write Karla.

Felix
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik 5/31/2005
Sensitive, stark and this line: "he dances with alzheimer's"

You're in a class of your own, Karla... and dripping with class! This is really good! katy xox
Reviewed by Dave Harm 5/31/2005
Great write... at times, patience isn't enough to understand the "workings" of another
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 5/31/2005
Most outstanding Karla!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 5/31/2005
Well, you ought to be ashamed, that's what I'm talking about, besides these damn "chains of memories" are heavy, don't you know? LOL
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 5/31/2005
(((Karla)))

So heartbreaking; a powerful write that grabs the soul and doesn't let go! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :( >tears <
Reviewed by E T Waldron 5/31/2005
Wow! Karla outstanding! You really scored with this one!Kudo's!

Love,
Eileen



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