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  1.  Life on Earth

by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Friday, June 03, 2005
Rated "G" by the Author.
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I'm sorry, Karen.

by gathering storm clouds
all is grey -
my temper in a fit
of fury
descends on anyone
around me -
a tornadic funnel
of anger
destroying all i love :
i don't care
who's hurt in the process -
it will be
the death of me as well .

(c) 2005, by Karla Dorman.


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Reviewed by Regis Auffray 6/4/2005
Yes. Well expressed, Karla. There's a reason for the anger and I suppose that love is the only cure. Thank you for sharing a universal truth. Amour et paix à toi. Régis
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 6/4/2005
What's in there has to come out... I have stuffed down anger over many years and now I know I'm as improperly volatile as spilled petroleum... and don't we always hurt those closest to us? Having lived an "only child"-type of existance, "sorry" was a word I struggled to use and can never remember having heard it said to me either. I have only relatively recently come to know of it's power to mend, heal, restore and strengthen - such that relationships can be even stronger than before! It's a "miracle" word! Now I can't seem to use it enough.. too much, probably, in an overly self-apologetic kind of way. Balance is a struggle, isn't it?! But this is a "laid bare" write that has got us all gathering in for a group hug, Karla!! So glad you and Karen can share at this deep level and not allow the walls to build and separate: good for you! Bless you both. LOL Kate xx
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 6/4/2005
Anger - sadly part of our human condition - but it sounds like you and Karen have already made peace - and may peace be with you for a very long time to come.
Reviewed by Joyce Hale 6/4/2005
Well spoken, and well written, Karla. Anger is usually a destroyer, and only with more love can it be saved.

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 6/3/2005
I am glad you forgave each other,
may God Bless you both
Reviewed by Felix Perry 6/3/2005
I know someone who this poem applies to so well, but until you summed it up so eloquently it had never dawned on my so well as when I read this.

Reviewed by Roger Ochs 6/3/2005
Now go and buy her a recording of "You Always Hurt The one You Love".
(If you buy the Spike Jones recording you can both laugh.)
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 6/3/2005
You'd Made Comment To All Those Multi-Million Dollar Homes Sliding Down Hillside-CALIFORNIA-----Anger,i.e. Karla Me,TRASK_


On News NBC TV,i.e One Who Lived In Loss-- Said Interview-Everybody Thinks We Live Here-BECAUSE We Are $RICH$,i.e. ASSHOLE If You are Liven In A $5 Million House--YOU ARE a $MILLIONARE F--Ken LIAR$....

Reviewed by E T Waldron 6/3/2005
Powerful write Karla! Anger is a waste of energy and a self-defeating emotion. I hope you are over it! I'm glad you can write about it so well, perhaps you are relieved now.

Reviewed by Dave Harm 6/3/2005
Great write... I feel you two could never stay angry for to long... you can feel your love coming through the screen...

An old AA thought says "Anger is fear turned inside out."
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 6/3/2005

You have described this so well. Don't worry, the emotion is only human's. We've all gone through this at one time or another.

You have described the feeling so well. Good job!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 6/3/2005
You do care, cause you said you did,
I heard you. Love ya!
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 6/3/2005
Seems when we are going through these soordid ordeal with our loved ones, we think the world is over. It isn't though, and I am glad to see that you understand that.
Reviewed by F William Broome 6/3/2005
Now, simmer down there, Girl. You're about to blow your top, and that won't be good. What has riled up our Sweetheart Poet of AD? Or is all of this your creativity in overdrive? - Bill
Reviewed by Rebecca Burns 6/3/2005
Wow, few words that said so much.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 6/3/2005
Powerful message poem!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 6/3/2005
apology accepted. i am sorry too, karla! please forgive me??...

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :( >tears <

excellent, emotive write! very well done; brava!
Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader) 6/3/2005
Excellent Powerful message!! Excellent Karla!
Anger is destructive in so many ways.
actions/reactions/boomerang. Superb!
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 6/3/2005
Huh, just cos I only just reviewed your last poem, Guess I upset you.

We've been promised thunder here tonight, yet we never get it.

Be safe special K..


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