|Reviewed by 000 000
|Dale, captured in beauty...the soul of the butterfly..the love for the moment. Awesome!!|
|Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
|Oh Dale this is so gorgeous so peaceful happy and calming. even with the someone falling which is so true. Love's worn by some, disgarded by others, yet we all come together. I love that.
This brings tears from the freedom of it all, yet the knowing of love is there to hold. This one really set me free with comfort.xo
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Dale...wonderful poetry my friend....love n luck....BHUWAN!!!!|
|Reviewed by D May (Reader)
|Dale--wonderful write and yes, love changes and has it phases. Well expressed.|
|Reviewed by Edward Lupinacci
|A subject that torments me to this day and you have spoken it like an artist showing all truth as so many see it|
|Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth
|so soft, delicate and elegant. I like the repeated lines and rhyme scheme. Just a note: You want a plural not a possessive. It's butterflies.|
|Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
This one tugs at the heart strings. Love the second
to last stanza...I have often asked that question,
as I am sure we all have. Many will relate to this poem.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|I love the motion in this one Dale, for love is ever
changing, never still, with all of the senses always
being stirred in different directions.You captured it so well!
|Reviewed by L. Figgins
|What a wonderful analogy, for butterflies live only a short while before they die. But have you seen them while they live? They dance in the air when they mate--an expression of pure joy. Butterflies live the ultimate freedom while they exist. This is a beauty, Dale...|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|i like this poem, Dale ... has a wonderful feel to it ...|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Most beautiful piece Dale!!
One that touches the heart!!
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|A truly captivating piece, Dale.|