|Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
|Superb!! Absolutely Superb!
This is Fantastic! (c :) the last lines, the whole truth of love. xo
This one is one of your very best ones!
|Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth
|this is beautiful and dreamy. this seems to be spoken by someone who has lost his or her way but then the stars light the way back home again. Incredible write.|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Ah Dale, a beautiful and very deep poem, so very haunting, this captures the reading with its beauty, and insightfulness,
|Reviewed by jude forese
|a journey brought to life with images that stir the mind and soul ... a most vivid and passionate sojourn ...|
|Reviewed by L. Figgins
|This encompasses all of life, Dale. Epical and haunting! We are born of the sea, it supports and nourishes us while we live. It bears our sorrows and echoes our anger. We sail on a ship of dreams--all lost souls in a spiteful sea. Until love brings us to harbor and the sea quiets. An awesome beauty!|
|Reviewed by D May (Reader)
|Wonderful, moving poetry Dale.|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Quite an epic journey, with a marvelous ending, Dale.|
|Reviewed by Cynth'ya firstname.lastname@example.org
|Styled like a modern day odyssey of "Jason and the Argonauts".
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|Reviewed by Aberjhani
|A nearly mystical flow of desire, passion, and longing fill these lines until they move through the reader like waves pushed along by the music of the voice of the poet. Beautiful indeed.|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
You've made me want to go on another cruise...sigh! Wait a minnit, I don't have to, all I have to do is ready this poem...and look at my pictures...and relive it all over again! Masterfully directed--sail on, Captain!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Sail on Dale writing like this puts you in the Captains seat
a superb blend of mixed emotions like the waves you travel.
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|This is quite a different canvas for you, Dale, and your imagery is just as strong. You are certainly adept at the depth of sustained metaphor you are able to bring to the gamut of human love-emotions. I like the way you saw this one through... like sailing through the eye of a storm... neat! Don't think my sealegs are that good, though... think I am a bit of a fair-weather sailor... think?! KNOW for certain sure! :)) TY Kate xx|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Oh this is masterfully written Dale!!
Oh My a keeper for sure my friend!!
Deep deep...most deeply touched poetry!!
|Reviewed by Edward Lupinacci
|I haven't been on a boat in a while
I am starting to re-think that now