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She-River
by A PAX

Thursday, June 09, 2005
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SHE-RIVER

 

A river flowed from coolest north

Upon an ancient, curving course

At times a drought would burn it dry

But would revive when angels......cried

 

The fount of life by tide renewed

Beneath the heavens......grey or blue

From surface clear.....to waiting shore

It gave it's all......and then........some......more

 

The river ran........as rivers should

Till it was blocked....by mortered wood

And trashed was splashed by darkest night

To sink below.......as toxic blight

 

No chance or storms would harm it's path

It was....as is.......devoid of WRATH

For all that changes......by it's bed

This river always.........flows........ahead

 

GURGLE...GURGLE.......GLUB

 

 

 

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RIVER
  

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Reviewed by Sherry Heim 6/10/2005
This flows smooth, clear and soothingly cool, Anita. I was waiting for you to turn her gorgeous purity into a mire of garbage and sewage, I am so glad you didn't take her down that path. I love the feeling of her strength, endurance and pristine beauty.

Take care,

Sherry
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 6/10/2005
We was on the same page, me with my She-Sea!! But, my... this is so soulful and gorgeous and shows water in a much better light! Less as temptress and more as pure, resilient and graceful femininity. Abounding and never-failing. Could also relate to the human spirit and emotions, too. What an amazing coin you are, Anita... completely diverse and yet beautiful on both sides!! :)) Bless you, Kate xx
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 6/10/2005
Quite a poem, Anita - and I love that graphic!
Reviewed by jude forese 6/9/2005
excellent poetry ... the imagery is awesome ... it's fluidity encapturing ...
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 6/9/2005
You drank the river? Whilst on your visit here. WOW..

No no no no, more times than liz talior...
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 6/9/2005
Lady A,

You change names faster than...a cheetah! :)

Strongly imaged and well penned--well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, and continued prayers, Karla. :)
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 6/9/2005
Very nice Lady A, this was wonderful!

Reindeer
Reviewed by Frank Whyte 6/9/2005
Strong work! The images were delightful, as was the ride, or should I say drift?

Frank
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 6/9/2005
Excellent write Lady A!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Felix Perry 6/9/2005
Quite the write, strong, passionate and suspenseful...also quite the new handle.

Felix
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