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The Martyr
by Carrie A Deveney

Friday, June 10, 2005
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She enters the desert


Painful blisters plague her feet


But she walks on


Entering the sun


Letting it burn away her skin


Releasing her soul


And she cools


As the sun dies


So she can live.

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Reviewed by E. Richardson 6/16/2005
very provacative, excellent imagery and methaphor
Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore 6/14/2005
this read like some existential riddle, and i found myself searching for the answer in the lines you'd written. i'm not sure if i found them, either. lol a thoughtful work, poet. you definitely drew me in.
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 6/11/2005
Wishful Thinking_

Credit For Write...

TRASK
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 6/11/2005
A very powerful write
God Bless
Michelle!
Reviewed by Huda Orfali 6/10/2005
Very powerful and beautiful rendering of martyrdom
thanks for sharing
love and peace
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 6/10/2005
A woman with a higher purpose and vision in every step... seems like a Phoenix-write to me, Carrie! Having a cause one is prepared to die for perhaps make sense of living. Love the cleanness of your lines and the crispness of your message. A wonderful poetic crucible, thank you. Kate x
Reviewed by L. Figgins 6/10/2005
True rendering of your character, Carrie. Some need their pain and embrace it. Fine write...
Reviewed by E T Waldron 6/10/2005
Superb capture of a martyred moment!

Blessings to you,
Eileen
Reviewed by Felix Perry 6/10/2005
Very in deep look at what this women is walking away from or walking to.

Felix
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