|Reviewed by lois christensen
|I'm glad you can see much on the River - I know - it has nothing to do with Blue song.|
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|'Like my bruised battered soul thoughts of you'------ EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Lena Kovadlo
|Why do you keep repeating the word blue over and over again? It can get a bit annoying to some readers.
Aside from this the poem is nicely crafted and emotional. Kudos to you! I enjoyed the read!
|Reviewed by Inspire Hope
|This poem is very heartfelt and skillfully done Regis! I love the picture speaks volumes! Be encouraged Regis and keep on writing!
|Reviewed by Nicole Weaver
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|Love the use of color to reflect emotion. This one feels natural, maybe because of the imagery. Hugs,
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Hobbs
Beautiful words. They waft along in a blue mist. Wonderful! Liz
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
Unsurpassed beauty in this poetic write . . . fabulous!!
|Reviewed by Michelle Mead
|this is a real beauty-i so love your poetry|
|Reviewed by Diana Wiles
|I Loved this..Blue is symbolic of so many things..sadness, loneliness..but also Healing... so calming too. Love, Diana.|
|Reviewed by Axilea MU
|Something very spontaneous in this poem that goes straight to the reader's heart and touches his/her senses.
|Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner
|Blue has many meanings of pain, some hidden. Great verses on Blue. I use this word also in many of my poems.|
|Reviewed by chris stienstra
I love the picture! For a poem in "blue" I saw sunshine in your words and love in your heart.
Best regards my friend,
|Reviewed by Michael Guy
|must've been a fine day that you wrote this -- the pic is wonderful -- can see you composing while looking out. And this short phrase style of yours really sings (the blue(s)!) Black, NOT, but blue is my favorite (aqua) and my studio always gets painted that color.
Love your style of writing.
|Reviewed by Silent Dream
|I have a few "of blue" also, my favorite color. Your thoughts immerse the reader in the intensity of the color. The saxophone even sounded like blue...
This quote about blue I just love, "As yellow is always accompanied with light, so it may be said that blue still brings a principle of darkness with it. The colour has a peculiar and almost indescribable effect on the eye. As a hue it is powerful, but it is on the negative side, and in its highest purity is, as it were, a stimulating negation. Its appearance, then, is a kind of contradiction between excitement and repose." ~Goethe, Theory of Colours (Translated by Charles Lock Eastlake)
So nicely done! Pen on ~SilentDream
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|I went to your list of posted poems and scrolled down the list until I found a title which struck a cord in my heart..."blue song" did the trick...this poem is so well written...thank you
|Reviewed by Dragon Blue
|Now that one was downright beautiful!! Hope you don't mind me giving you a poem to a poem review, but here is my rendition of blue:
With Music of the rain
Thunder resounds in the flame
As the shadows dance
The reflections prance
In the mirrors of our souls
Igniting embers energy flows
With the fog of our scent
Mingled with smoking incense
Increasing our desire
Blending essence of fire
Our earthy vessels writhing
Chalice and phallus meet
Melt with steamy heat
The sensations of the flute
As the saxophone takes root
The storm becomes the butterfly kiss
The horns become the dragonfly mist
Rhythm is the percussion
Reactor of the reaction
With lust in love
Below and above
Sweet release of intensity
Or shall we call it tenacity?
Only the storm can say
Take it all the way
On this night with the moon new
And the music of the rain and...Blue
Blue - The wolf knew
One week after moving
in with the wolf disguised
Through a beating
no anger or frustration am I to realize
I am not allowed to feel in any extreme
Neither am I allowed to cry or scream
I am to do only as I am told
for to do otherwise again
the violence will unfold
I will be grateful
for this I have been given
a home that will never be mine
that I live in
So I shall silently cry and wish
for my Daley Storm and internally relish
Basking in his love that was so pure
if only I could have known this before
the door to my cage was locked into place
like the bruises
upon my neck and face
The wolf knew
The Color Blue
Blue is Serenity
The warmth within
The color white
One of three primary colors
Opposite of Orange
My mood when I cry
The color inside
of the yellow flame
Blue is cold
Blue is Hot
Anger and Madness
it is NOT
Blue is the color
of my bruises when abused
It is ice
It is snow
Day & Night
The color that within is white
Upon black it shimmers and gleams
Blue is Self
Blue is Me
Write to Live!! Live to Write! Write On!
|Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
This has such a beautiful sadness. And on a day when I'm feeling much the same way. This truly is exceptional in my eyes. The photo is the cherry on top!
|Reviewed by Joni Stewart-Hague
|::sigh:: Regis, you have become one of my favorite authors, and are fast approaching the very top of the list. This has a sadness, a wistfulness, that is so very appealing. Beautifully done, my friend !
|Reviewed by Lynn Barry
|Melancholy yes... but your upbeat generous attitude comes through as always...very nice.|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|almost missed this one ... excellent poem, thanx for sharing, Regis ...|
|Reviewed by Barbara Terry
|Regis dear, I acho Gwen in what she said. Your pom describes my life almost to the heart of how I was forced to live my life for so many year. My black and blue soul will never be fulfilled regardless of how much I try to let the past go. There is so much that was stolen from me at such a very young age. I was forced to endure horrors that no person should have to go through. Even today there are those narrow-minded people who just have no idea what awaits them on judgement day. OH and BTW, I started back to work today too. Everything is going good. I passed my stress test with flying colors, and I no longer have to take my beta blockers for my heart either. I still have to take my plavix, because of the high cholesterol. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, stubborn to a fault, joy to the woeld, peace on earth, & (((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little terrified sister, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I may as well be."
|Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
|Your photo evokes whispered messages to me. Phrases celebrating the blue hues of serenity, sorrow, peace and mysticism! I can almost hear the call of a loon. I love your photo and your poem, Regis. Thank you!|
|Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Your poetry is always so beautiful and touching! It really is...
even though sometimes there is longing, there is still so much warmth!
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Blue is supposedly for true friendship; but you have described this with your pain too. For some reasons, it seems to fit in as well.
Thank you so much for continuing to share your poetry with us in the den!
Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)
P.S. This picture "Blue" also reminds me of one of the poems I wrote, entitled, "It's A Wonderful World", which I had dedicated to my dad in my personal site, but it's diffferent in compared to your poem, for my blueness in the poem is about true friendship and everythng wonderful...:)
|Reviewed by Chanti Niven
You do take beautiful photographs and I love the blue tint added. Like Picasso you are expressing yourself in this colour to depict your emotions. Blue may be the colour used to depict sadness but I also think it is the colour of hope. The endless azure of a clear sky that reaches out to eternity.
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|Regis- wonderful poetry of sadness. Your photo is gorgeous|
|Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
This is Marvelous. A poem of the true romantic and loving heart of yours. I love the way you used your favorite colors and turned then into a bruise and then the black are the shadows and then eliminated them so there is no darkness. This poem is absolutely spectacular!!! and so is that view from your window there.
Blue is Happiness. The Blue bird of Happiness. May your days and heart always be Blue with Love and Happiness forever and for always!
Je T'aime xoox
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Nice one Reg and so complete with so few words this has summed up a perfect love that should be.
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|I relate too your message. Very stylish majestic poem...|
|Reviewed by Michelle Mills
|This is a window into your heart Reg. Now I know which colors you chose on the personality test! :-} Beautifully penned, with incredible metaphors...Love, Michelle|
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|Excellent offering Regis, and beautiful photo!
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|Fantastically well penned
|Reviewed by Sarah Tagert
|Lovely write, as always Reg. Enjoyed reading this one!!|
|Reviewed by Denise Edwards
|So cute, Regis! Blue is my favorite color, and you've captured all it's hues and shades beautifully! Thank you for sharing!
|Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez
Blue is splended!
Really a good one Regis.
all the best',
Rich Criso Suarez
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|Aweee-This is Beautifuuuuuul POem Regis- Blue, who would of known-
Blue could be described so sweetly and full of meaning! Like a memory of a special time and place- GREAT Pic too Reg. Soft hazy BLUE picture-LOve it! Many HuGs 2 U- Lady,Sheee
|Reviewed by Constance Gotsch
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Mmmmm - makes me think Joni Mitchell and Procul Harem - though "white" is in there somewhere, too... this is soulful and soul food, Regis, and you hold the tension beautifully. Moment also captured perfectly in your picture - that instant before colour creeps in.... But even light cannot seem to hold perfect balance, so why should we expect to? Especially where the oceans of emotion are concerned. Beautifully written and expressed. Love perhaps hurts and heals in equal measure. TY and Bless you, Kate xx|
|Reviewed by Safi Abdi
|Enjoyed this, great work, Regis.
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww...sorry you're feeling so blue. :( Know you are loved--look at how many you touch with your words. I am grateful to be included...
Beautiful, poignant poetry; well done!
((((HUGS)))) and more ((((HUGS)))) *just because*, love, Karla. :(
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Oh And I love you too my sweet friend!!
My blue is just one shade darker than yours okay!!
Heart touching read Regis...but nice song!!
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Excellent write and photo
Don't be blue too long..
Thanks for your talents Regis..
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|I love the colour blue so I totally enjoyed this. Wonderful write and photo.|
|Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
|Excellence, Regis. It made me think of Neil Diamond's "Songs Sung Blue", too. Great job on the poem and that gorgeous picture!!
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|a fine lyrical write, mon ami, and that picture is breathtaking! bravo!! give yourself a pat on the back; you deserve it, mon ami! c'est magnifique!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, ton ami a texas, karen lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Aberjhani
|Very fine shades of lyrical beauty that please the ears, the eyes, and the heart. A wonderful write.|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Ah, so lovely Regis, this is beautiful and so moving, excellent poetry!
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|You do 'blue' well, Regis - and that truly is a captivating photo.|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Nothing blue about these blues.|
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|Beautiful blue, "Songs sung blue"
I like the color and the mood here.
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|True blue and done so well.|
|Reviewed by A PAX
nice picture .........good combo
|Reviewed by Paul Williams
|Ahh it's such a wonderful colour blue, especially where love is concerned...oops getting naughty now lol...Loved this Regis, excellent work my friend.
|Reviewed by Sandra Mushi
|Lolol ..... adorable ... funny ... sweet ... Love the scenery!
God bless, Regis,
|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
|Nicely done, Regis. Photo is perfect!
|Reviewed by Regina Pounds
|Beautiful, Regis. Blue stands for true/faithful...lovely photo - as always. (You're wealthy in that.)
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Whoever it is you love is one lucky person...Ed|
|Reviewed by Handsum Hart
|There are many ways to say I love you, and you've picked a unique way.
Peace and sunshine
|Reviewed by Eddie Thompson
|Well done...One of your recurring themes, Regis...great poetry.|
|Reviewed by Brian Pellerino
|Point on Reg!
Excellent meter and paced perfectly for the color. I'm feeling all blue myself...
|Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks
|Absolutely...moody-blues blue! Beautiful photo, and equallity matching poem! Kudos...
|Reviewed by L. Figgins
|God, do I love this or what?! For one thing we have that Blue Mountain thing going on here, too. Secondly, if this isn't a blue town-I don't know what is! Thirdly, mention a sax and Lin follows you anywhere. Fourthly(is that a word, "Teach"?), the rhythm of this poem sounds like a sax playing. Fifthly(?), your "bruised and battered heart" speaks to mine, bro...|
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
|Romantic You Write Done Right On_
But Ya Gotta Watchen Those Pictures Deceiving What The Eye Cannot See Beneath The Erie Waters Hidden In (Haze) Maze Of Life...
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|Gorgeous, poem and photo, Regis, with the subtle flavor of bittersweetness. Very nice work!! Smooth as silk with a soft even flow of emotions from the heart.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Regis this poem and the photo is a sumptuous delight, even the tinge of sadness, can't dampen the beauty of what I see. Bravo!
Blessings to you,
|Reviewed by Huda Orfali
|Blue is my favorite color too
i love the poem and the pic
very touching and so sweet
love and peace
|Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)
|Very heart touching poem, Regis ... Loved the pic!|
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|Outstanding poem, mon ami. I warned you about showing me pictures of the mountain, love bunny. Stop tempting me. Just kidding, ladies. (I don't want the Regis Fan and Love Club hunting me down.) ROFL. ...|
"Auffray's Peak" :-)~~~~~Nordette
|Reviewed by Ann Marquette
|Photo is beautiful...
I FEEL the melancholy, the sadness in your through this beautiful poem.
Regis, do NOT give up on yourself... keep writing with your heart, your soul...and you will find the rainbow.