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Arrested floral Development
by A PAX

Friday, June 10, 2005
Rated "G" by the Author.
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ARRESTED FLORAL DEVELOPMENT

 

Round the petals, slept in row

As oddly did one deftly grow

Elements had frayed it's edge

As near perfection framed it's wedge

 

Why the phlower would hold on

To such a blemish it had spawned

When every petal...posed as told

This shabby pad looked bent and old

 

The wind would try to pry the petal

As it would whip, and howl as nettle

And yet the ph-lower did hold on

For empty spaces......show......whats gone

 

A

 

The Frayed Petal
  
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Reviewed by Felix Perry 6/12/2005
I think we all have the ability to be like that tattered battered flower and hang in when things get rough and the winds turn stormy.
Good write Lady,
Felix
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 6/12/2005
... cut and paste Aberjhani... let's hear it for the phlowers who know for certain darn sure that "-lower" is power on its head!! You always turn me inside out and upside down with the uniqueness of your divine perspectives - to say nothing of your poetic ability to transpose them into words. You are a gift. TY Kate xx
Reviewed by Randal Files (Reader) 6/11/2005
Beautiful! Another awesome display of your talent. Thank you!
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 6/11/2005
Lady A,

Now THIS is poetry. Perfection!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(((HUGS))) and love, and continued prayers, Karla. :)
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 6/11/2005
This is a lovely poetic gift eloquently shared, Anita. Thank you. Love and peace to you. Regis
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 6/11/2005
quite an "arresting" write; this had my attention! as always, flawless poetry from you; brava!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D
Reviewed by Aberjhani 6/11/2005
It takes a keen poetic vision to recognize, as you do in ARRESTED FLORAL DEVELOPMENT, that satisfying beauty and inspiration can be experienced through even the smallest and least obvious objects and circumstances. Where the minds of most others would have dismissed such sight, yours transformed it into a poem that blossoms repeatedly inside one's heart.
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 6/11/2005
Nothing 'arrested' about this captivating and thought provoking poem, Anita.
Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader) 6/11/2005
This is so encouraging and such a strong message in such a unique way. even the ph- spelling keeps the individuality and uniqeness about it as we are. I love this. and yet the ph-lower did hold on For empty spaces show what's gone. Superb Excellence!xo
Reviewed by Nordette Adams 6/10/2005
Your mind and gift continue to flourish.



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