|
andrea coltman, click here
to update your web pages on AuthorsDen.
|
|
|
|
Picture Postcard
Dear Darling,
The weather is here,
Wish you were lovely.
I’m not fine dear.
Time just drags on,
But the holiday is marvellous
And, I’m having a wonderful time
Without you
God, I wish you were here
And, I was at home
I miss the dog, but
That’s about it
Hope you like the card
I don’t
Must go now
All my love
To you
XXXXXXXX
© Andrea Coltman
|
|
|
Want to review or comment on this
poem?
Click here to login!
Need a FREE Reader Membership?
Click here for your Membership!
|
| Reviewed by Edward Lupinacci |
6/17/2005 |
|
| Very original and I must say the picture is perfect for the poem |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
6/15/2005 |
|
Fine humor Andea!!
Love Tinka |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen |
6/14/2005 |
|
Cute Graphic, and great poem
God Bless
Michelle! |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
6/13/2005 |
|
Well your dog is your best friend. So... lol
you find a way to get him a card. ;) |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
6/13/2005 |
|
Whimsical and funny look at the things we would often like to say instead of what we actually say. I know this one could have many verses for sure. Cute Andrea,
Felix |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Handsum Hart |
6/13/2005 |
|
This is cute, made me laugh.
Peace |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
6/13/2005 |
|
| Quite a picture postcard, Andrea! And now I wonder, if both my tiny mutt and myself disappeared, might my spouse post such a postcard, too?!! |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
6/13/2005 |
|
Someone woke up this morning, this sunny morning in a erm, well a ladies kinda mood.
This is clever Andrea. Love the satire of this lovers- not- dualouge.
Stay well kido... |
|
|
|
|
|
|
Share
Print
Save