|Reviewed by Duke LaRance
|Vesna: This is so concise and yet so beautifully expressive. You are definitely at the top of your game! -- Duke|
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|Raise above it all... Never let the Negativity Suck you in! STay strong..and Listen to your heart, as YOUr poetry shows. I enjoy your feelings! and changes within and around! Terrific work Girl- Lady,Sheee|
|Reviewed by ~ Chanti
|Such an intense poem, filled with raw emotion. I could feel it palpably. Great work!
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|Quite the show and almost dare of strength. It's electrifying to say the least.
Honest and forthright. Loved it!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|Reviewed by Barbara Terry
|OMG Vesna if only I had the courage of the last 2 lines when I was 10 years old, I wouldn't have this sorrow now.This is a great piece Vesna, and only you could write like this so well. Thnx for sharing sis, I really like this one. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom ou love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, stubborn to a fault, joy tot he world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little terrified sister, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I may as well be."
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Love the theme. Very well done!|
|Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz
|I agree with Kate about the unique concept here.
Well done, Ves!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|This is a firey Vesna making her stance known once and for all! Brava!I love this poem!Beautifully done!
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
|How To Broadcast In Silence,i.e.For I'll Not Let You Enter My Mind!
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Well said. Keep the front door of the mind shut. To all negitivity, just letting in faith inspiring enter.. Just kick 'em way into touch...|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Shelter in the eye of the storm... this is beautifully expressed, Vesna and a unique concept and dialogue, I think. Makes me appreciate the love/hate relationship we can have with the elements and how we are both able to withstand them or yield to them in equal measure... that is, if they are not consuming us first! And they are soooo influential in our mood swings, aren't they? Can testify to the wearing effects of living in an environment of perpetual "thunder on the mountain"! The brooding of it can almost quench even the most sunshiney of natures sometimes... Keep smiling :)) Very neat beat to this one and wisdom contained within it. TY Kate xx|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|A wonderful prayer that is well worth the reading by all.
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Thunder truly is a most frightening thing to many, Vesna.|
|Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
|that's right, grrrl...don't let nobody's negative energy influence your positivity. a hard thing to do and an easy thing to say, i know, but a necessity, in the journey of life. wonderfully written, concise and to the point. i appreciate you!|
|Reviewed by L. Figgins
|Great write! We are always struggling to banish negative thoughts that try to enter our minds and pull us into a vortex of fear and despair...(Thunder seems to be on both our minds, Vesna)|