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| Reviewed by Divinity 11 |
2/4/2006 |
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| Interesting indeed..........vying for supremecy, it's what fragments everything and we find ourselves in a world of lost and fragmented pieces |
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| Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers |
6/15/2005 |
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Peter,
I wasn't sure until the very end that there was going to be a survivor, but I'm glad and grateful there was!
Wonderfully penned emotions!
Lisa |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
6/15/2005 |
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| A captivating piece, Peter, with a marvelous ending. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
6/14/2005 |
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| your transition of images make a much inspired poem ... |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
6/14/2005 |
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Your poems are always so full of meaning.
I hope all is well as the ending seems to imply!
Superb write! |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
6/14/2005 |
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| You had me going on this write but I'm glad it ended well. Superb |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
6/14/2005 |
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| A wonderful poem. |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
6/14/2005 |
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| Great expressions of turmoil, and how when all seemed lost, bang it came together unexpectedly. Enjoyed the telling. Nicely done Peter... |
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