|Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
|Dear Mark ... this is so very soul and heartfelt! Inspired! Thank you for these loving uniting words:
'...I find shades of it in people
And personalities beyond
and the reality of these:
'...So to finally see through the Illusion
This contusion upon consciousness
A creation of febrile mind-states
Related to the inability to create
A lack of humility and the
Continuous desire for
Someone truly true...'
Defines our search so well!
Love & Friendship to you!
Suzie xox :-)
|Reviewed by Michelle Smolen
|The words dance in my mind,flowing circular phrasings take you up and away. I have never had my spirit dance to words with no instruments... amazing.bye now, I've got to read this again.
I so feel ya!
Your simpatico soul sister
PS I can't wait to read more of your work!
|Reviewed by M. B.
|Oh my, Mark, what an intense, profound, dynamic piece! There are so many fantastic lines here that to point them out, I might as well copy/paste the entire piece. You've out done yourself, Dear Mark, with this one.
Camaraderie opens Hearts and
Souls to passion
Reveals the Spiritual in material
Form torn directly from the womb of
Creation Herself weaving spells of
An exotic nature demanding
The Love of someone
- Nobody is sure of who
But we’ve found each other
Here in the depths of Hearts
Where Love has been
From the start
Well, I suppose in the end, I had to point out an especially beautiful stanza...
This whole piece must have taken exactly a body of blood to write.
|Reviewed by ~ Chanti
I'm glad I took the time to enter your den and read your work. You're an intelligent poet with a great philosophy and it appears you've found a great love. Thanks for sharing.
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
|Awesome poetry Mark! You have amazing talent.
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|excellent Mark, so deep and powerful, liked this,
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Thoroughly thought-provoking, Mark. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis|
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|Solid! Wonderful language and grooving rhythm, Mark. Plus it's provocative. You've got all the right stuff here.|
|Reviewed by Sandra Mushi
|The poem says it all! Its a beautiful piece, Mark!
|Reviewed by Aberjhani
|A beautiful declaration of our (hopefully) collective spiritual purpose for living a human existence, that we might in fact evolve beyond the illusory to connect with the essentially divine within us all. The sensitivity of these lines hover and radiate like an astral being staring in wonder at the explosive origin of its own, and the universe's, creation. A tremendously satisfying reading experience.
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
"Exactly" speaks for itself.
Healthy Blissful Day, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
|Intriguing, Mark! You've penned some great phrases. I especially am attuned to:
"It’s a similarity of Soul
A singular sensation
A simpatico Spirit in tune to
Slightly otherworldly songs"
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|I found this write to be exactly fascinating, Mark.|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|wonderful poem, mark, and the picture is neat! i love it; very well done! bravo!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in burleson, karen lynn. :D