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Troubles
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Friday, June 17, 2005
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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I have trouble
making the words stand still -
I get them all
dressed and looking perfect
and just when the
camera flashes, one
bursts out crying
(that one has always been
a little shy).

I have trouble
making the words stand still -
just when I think I have
everything in
place, I find they
aren't - they've disappeared
(getting out of
order is one of their most
favorite games).

I have trouble
making the words stand still -
they are wound up
and are bouncing off of
the walls in a
hyperkenetic zoom
of cheetah speed
(I can't keep up - no more
sugar for them).

I have trouble
making the words stand still -
they gotta fight
and argue over who's first
and who is next -
"HE WAS FIRST THE LAST TIME!!!!"
so on and so
forth until I'm ready
to scream...CALGON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I have trouble
making the words stand still -
they've been stuck in
the pen all day and now's
the time to play.
Awwww...what the heck, I think
I will join them
(I've been working too hard
any damn way).

(c) 2005, Karla Dorman.



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Reviewed by John Martin 7/12/2005
You have captured the essence of writing, a most difficult thing to do. Very, very nice job.
Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson 6/18/2005
Great job! I'm laughing at the dog's picture and enjoying this delightful poem. Thanks!
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 6/18/2005
Your unique style and creativity shine in this write, Karla. Merci. Amour et paix. Ton ami de la C-B, Canada. Régis
Reviewed by Dawn Richerson 6/18/2005
Karla, I hope you get the opportunity to "show" these poems to the world, perform them even at readings. You have such a unique blend of humor and wisdom. A fabulous write!
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 6/18/2005
Another enchanting write Karla, you do these so well!

Peace, Carole
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 6/18/2005
(((Karla)))

Spent some time at Louie Sandusky's house lately, hmmmmm??? LOL

Wonderfully delightful write, love the metaphoric comparison in this clever poem! Very well done; brava!! Take a bow; you have earned it!! BRAVA, poet laureate!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 6/18/2005
Great write...know the feeling mind does the CHA-CHA!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 6/18/2005
This is absolutely amazing in its unique set up. You, author have command of your words in the most humorous way! I bow to the great pen!
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 6/18/2005
Yet another whimsical magical write, Karla!
Reviewed by Roger Ochs 6/18/2005
Wonderful use of repetition and playfulness.
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster 6/18/2005
Karla, you have just made my morning :). This is wonderful. Have a great weekend.

Hugs, Trish
Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader) 6/17/2005
Very fun!!
Reviewed by E T Waldron 6/17/2005
Karla this will be one of my favorites to keep, you really cooked this one on all burners! Beautifully conceived and written!

Love,
Eileen
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 6/17/2005
I love the pic, and the poem even more
God Bless
Michelle!
Reviewed by jude forese 6/17/2005
the war of words just runs us down sometimes ... when we surrender to them they seem to come out of nowhere ...
Reviewed by George Carroll 6/17/2005
Fantastic write and the ending is so appropriate. LOL
Reviewed by Felix Perry 6/17/2005
Well if they end up jumping into place as well as they did in this poem I think you have nothing to fear, they know where they should be. Good write Karla.

Felix
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 6/17/2005
Hell yeah, take a swig, light up a cig and chill out, babe, know-whot-I-mean?
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