|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
*grins* I enjoyed this one. :) Spicy delight to read on a hot Texas afternoon...more reason to take a cold shower! HOT, HOT, HOT!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
|Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez
the way to man's heart is food,
then the heart gets going and oh no!lol.
Rich Criso Suaez
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|sizzling stew of a write...me like that kinda cooking!!
|Reviewed by F William Broome
|In these few words you've described what it is all about. And, you've done a wonderful job describing work and hunger and feasting. What else do we need?????? - Bill|
|Reviewed by Li Smith
|A sultry summer evening ... footsteps. Evocative!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|sounds like a man of good tatse ;)|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|Nice piece enjoyed much
like the turn of events at it's end
im love my Florida rain
William .....peace & Love
|Reviewed by Julie Donner Andersen
|Cute last line! When Hubs and I were dating, he asked "Wanna screw?"....then held out a handful of nuts and bolts. (I'm such a sucker for romance. lol)
I like the descriptives in this poem. Made me feel the hot summer night.