|Reviewed by Harley Porter (Reader)
|That was really deep. I enjoyed it. It made me a little nostalgic and sad. I like the writing style there. very creative.|
|Reviewed by L. Figgins
|From that sorrow comes a rainbow--a promise of the sun and a prism of colors. The rain cleanses us and we begin again...|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Symbolically captivating, Dale. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you. Regis|
|Reviewed by The Smoking Poet
|Life is all things, and surely a reflection of the heart with which we face it...
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
|Thank God for all the rainbows at the crossroads!
This poem is an enjoyable read CJ. Hope your
vacation clears away the dust.
|Reviewed by Tracey Hardie
|awwww but when it rains.....the dust is just like yesterday...gone!
So good to read you! ;)
|Reviewed by Paul Williams
|Superb Pen here Dale
|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
|nice capture, Dale.
embrace that dusty highway...
|Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Wishing you much peace and relaxation on your vacation!
|Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth
|you capture the beginning of an incredible journey. You never know when adventure or love lie ahead and still you plug on ahead. The descriptions paint a picture in your mind. This is brilliant, Dale. Submit to a good magazine.
(P.S. Have a good vacation. I'll miss ya. See ya when ya get back.)
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Enjoyed the descriptions and message in this write.|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Have a great vacation! :) An excellently penned, image write--I tasted the dust. :)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Well penned Dale!!
Enjoy your vacation and be back safe dear friend!!
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Wonderful poem. You'll be missed. Have a great vacation and be back very soon!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)