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| Reviewed by Harley Porter (Reader) |
7/19/2005 |
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| That was really deep. I enjoyed it. It made me a little nostalgic and sad. I like the writing style there. very creative. |
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| Reviewed by L. Figgins |
7/17/2005 |
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| From that sorrow comes a rainbow--a promise of the sun and a prism of colors. The rain cleanses us and we begin again... |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
7/14/2005 |
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| Symbolically captivating, Dale. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you. Regis |
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| Reviewed by The Smoking Poet |
7/8/2005 |
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Life is all things, and surely a reflection of the heart with which we face it...
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| Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® |
7/6/2005 |
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Thank God for all the rainbows at the crossroads!
This poem is an enjoyable read CJ. Hope your
vacation clears away the dust.
Blessings,
Joseph |
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| Reviewed by Tracey Hardie |
7/5/2005 |
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awwww but when it rains.....the dust is just like yesterday...gone!
So good to read you! ;) |
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| Reviewed by Paul Williams |
6/30/2005 |
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Superb Pen here Dale
Paul;-) |
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| Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen |
6/30/2005 |
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nice capture, Dale.
embrace that dusty highway...
safe travels! |
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| Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci |
6/29/2005 |
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Dale,
Wishing you much peace and relaxation on your vacation!
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| Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth |
6/29/2005 |
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you capture the beginning of an incredible journey. You never know when adventure or love lie ahead and still you plug on ahead. The descriptions paint a picture in your mind. This is brilliant, Dale. Submit to a good magazine.
(P.S. Have a good vacation. I'll miss ya. See ya when ya get back.) |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
6/29/2005 |
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| Enjoyed the descriptions and message in this write. |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
6/29/2005 |
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Dale,
Have a great vacation! :) An excellently penned, image write--I tasted the dust. :)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :) |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
6/29/2005 |
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Well penned Dale!!
Enjoy your vacation and be back safe dear friend!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
6/29/2005 |
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Wonderful poem. You'll be missed. Have a great vacation and be back very soon!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o) |
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