this seems a little off your usual material but really well done and very prophetic to say the least and somewhat on the macabre but very very vivid in the images portrayes. Well done Steve my friend, well done.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Have no idea why people (you here) deem it necessary to put quotes above the poem that someone is getting ready to read. I mean, the poem--and those lines--are going to be read, becausr whoever is alreasdy is here is here to read the darn thing. It is a fruitless maneuver.
The poem was well done with just the right amount of gloom and doom as its premise. Almost Poe-like. Almost. Good, I liked it.