|Reviewed by Tina Clark
|Wow, warm in here! Nicely done my friend, such a passionate read! Enjoyed, Thanks!
|Reviewed by Sandra Mushi
|Ooh, its getting too hot in here! This one is a sizzle, Ron! very sensual!
" ... your touch still hot, I feel reborn."
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
|This one is too hot to handle Ron !
Very sensuous and passionate
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|A passionately sensual poetic offering, Ron. Nicely done. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace to you. Regis|
|Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)
|Whew! definitely fireworks!|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|sounds like you had a great time ;) keep it up ...|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|I was wondering whether or not you can put your poems on the AD's page. I think it will be much easier for me to read it.
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|The forth of July is going to have a whole new meaning to me now :-) HOT write.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|oo la la Ron, What a turn on! A real fired up fourth for you;-)
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|My love rocket with this write,
Did fly high above and explode so bright,
Thankfully it is a day for fireworks,
Otherwise I would be ticketed by the cops, the jerks...
A quite sensual, sexy write, Ron...I see how you are spending your holiday...Ed
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes