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She Prays On Her Knees
by Michelle R Kidwell Power In The Pen
Wednesday, July 06, 2005
Rated "G" by the Author.
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To All Who Have Suffered
She prays
On bent knees
At nineteen
She's still young
Barely past childhood
But for years
She's suffered
Pain so deep
Piercing like a knife
It makes her want to scream!
Instead
She gets on her
Knee's and prays.
Copyright Michelle R Kidwell
July.6.05
7:59 A.M
PST
Authors Comments
This is not necessarily about me, but it could easily be, because it was about the age of nineteen or a little before that I began suffering from a condition they now believe is MD, but this is not going to get me down!
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
7/6/2005 |
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| Well done Michelle! |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
7/6/2005 |
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Michelle,
No matter the age, we all need strength for the pain we all go through; a powerfully written reminder.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :( |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
7/6/2005 |
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Faith can move mountains , and this poem epitomises great faith !
Peter |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
7/6/2005 |
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a package of courage...that is what you are, michelle! beautiful, reaffirming write of your faith! brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Denise Edwards |
7/6/2005 |
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| Bravo, good for you! |
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