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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
7/9/2005 |
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Dark write Steven...and hey don't pay attention to assholes...like that...when ever you like to talk...I maybe a piss off..but a good listener too! Show them the middle finger as a "ZAPPER" and laugh in their face my friend!!
Love and Warm Hugs Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
7/8/2005 |
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| It is good to express one's feelings and to share them with others, Stevie. Just ignore the "negative" and stick with those who love you. Love, peace, and strength to you. Regis |
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| Reviewed by Katy Walsvik |
7/8/2005 |
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Collapsing me is becoming a habit, I see, Stevie. I can handle it, if reading such fine poetry and such warm comments is the cause.
Your alliteration lends so nicely to the rhythm "Nature and nurture nor will they forgive..."
Oh, and it sounds like you may need 'katy's lecture #329 on suicide. I have the script handy... you stay alive and I'll get it. Don't move!
I just found a new friend... don't be doing yourself harm. Got it?
(and stay away from those "dreadful websites") Ahem... 'you have poems to write before you sleep... poems to write before you sleep...' (Sorry, Mr. Frost) katy xox |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
7/8/2005 |
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A dark write my friend but not without hope, I think your refernces to past loves, inferred sexuality by others and peer support say a lot that you know what is best for the future and it is not death at least not by your own hand.
Felix |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
7/8/2005 |
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| Aw, yes, you saiy that, but you need us and those of your peers around you when you decided to die, otherwise you would be silent, Steven. You are too much of a pragmatic (I think) to be thinking that way. |
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| Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G |
7/8/2005 |
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For you with little Faith
Dig in deeper
Lest not be judged-etc...
Find comfort tonight in Mr. Noodles
Feel his warmth - fill you-
We all care! Hugs,SheeeOXO |
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| Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez |
7/8/2005 |
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good one Steve.
keep up the good work.
peace',
Rich Criso Suarez |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
7/8/2005 |
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| Jennifer response to this echo's my thoughts. I love the way she said that! Another person that cares......so you might as well stick around :-) |
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| Reviewed by Jennifer Ragan (Reader) |
7/8/2005 |
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Slip back in and tie a knot.
Who cares what others think.
Most poeple suck and rot.
Jennifer:) |
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