Haiku (5/7/5): The Greatest Show On Earth (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

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Haiku (5/7/5): The Greatest Show On Earth
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Saturday, July 09, 2005
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A bit of fun--enjoy!

circus come to town:
a cotton candy sun plays
with animal clouds

(c) 2005, Karla Dorman.

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Reviewed by Brian Pellerino	7/11/2005

Karla, Thank you for some joy amidst all the turmoil! Peace and (((Hugs))) B




*Reviewed by Joseph OneLight®*	7/11/2005

Karla, This is a PERFECT haiku/senryu! Stand up and take a bow! Love & Light, Joseph




Reviewed by Carole Mathys	7/11/2005

Lovely Karla...




Reviewed by Mr. Ed	7/11/2005

My kind of circus - and very well done, Karla!




Reviewed by Dawn Richerson	7/10/2005

hey, I saw some of those animal clouds in the sky last week in Texas! good to read your work again. it almost always makes my heart sing. D.




Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore	7/10/2005

wow! great minds think alike! i just wrote a cotton candy poem too..but i like this haiku, it certainly expresses the eternal joy that comes from these simple pleasures, brought about by a visit to the circus!




Reviewed by jude forese	7/10/2005

a wonderful image, Karla ... nice alliteration ...




Reviewed by Sherry Heim	7/9/2005

Beautiful images, Karla! take care, Sherry




Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen	7/9/2005

This is excellent, I did enjoy God Bless Michelle!




Reviewed by Felix Perry	7/9/2005

Very uplifting of spirits and memories. Felix




Reviewed by Tracey O'	7/9/2005

It is the greatest show on earth and Karla especially this circus you have written about here It's fantastic better than anything. And you brought a smile to my face. Thanks Karla xo just what i needed today You are the greatest!! (c :) Tracey




Reviewed by Ed Matlack	7/9/2005

I love cotton candy, now I will have to drive to the boardwalk at the shore and find a parking space and walk forever just to buy some...but it will be well worth it, thanks for the idea...Ed




Reviewed by Tinka Boukes	7/9/2005

Great Ku Karla...hmmmmm me Tinka...hehehe Kate...someone From canada...and out to kill a few friends on AD....hehehehe!! Love Tinka




Reviewed by E T Waldron	7/9/2005

I love it, a beautiful ku Karlaku;-) We need that sunshine and the clowns of circus fame right now. Thank you too for joining me to pray!Of course I knew you would, my friend;-) Love, Eileen




Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado	7/9/2005

(((Karla))) You got me...for a minute, I thought it was about the Ringaling Brothers and Barnum and Bailey Circus; but I was pleasantly surprised! Wonderfully happy and sweet write (no puns intended); very clever! Great job, Poet! BRAVA! (((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D




Reviewed by Peter Paton	7/9/2005

This is an amazing haiku of eloquent elements Peter




Reviewed by Kate Clifford	7/9/2005

My sweet tooth is happy :-)

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