|Reviewed by Sandra Mushi
|Ron, I don't know how I missed this one! It sounds more likea portrayal of the satires of life. Good write, Ron. Excellent!!
|Reviewed by Safi Abdi
|A masterpiece on all accounts!
|Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)
|I like it! I'm not sure I understood all of it, but... good write!|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|conceptually precise and quilled to perfection, in an ironic sort of way ...|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|You have made the words do your bidding most excellently in this poetic composition, Ron. Thank you. Love and peace to you. Regis|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Excellent depiction of a unique character. Superb writing Ron!
Love the pic too!
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
|You have a way with words Ron , that depicts reality in its starkest form
Clinical and incisive analysis
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Gosh! The write was so powerful in strength. Goof job Ron!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Excellent delivery from your master quill!!
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|This is magnificent, Ron. Wonderful write.
|Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
|Ron, as we have all said since childhood, I'm entitled to my opinion and my opinion is that this magnificent poem is your best! Once read in its entirety, I went back and slowly savored single lines, even a word here, one there, like "liquidity."
By the time I reached that last verse, that last line, I could feel my skin goosebumpy... this is a flawless, layered piece. WOW! katy xox