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Made For Me by Johnnie I Johnson Sunday, July 10, 2005 Not rated by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan This poem was written for a co-worker of mine as a gift for her husband on their anniversary. Though I have never been married, I know what the bible tells us about how we should be to our spouse.
I Made a vow to God to love you for life For better or for worse, richer or poorer To honor our union as husband and wife And with each passing day, love you the more You are my second half that makes me complete Even when alone, I never feel alone You are that much a special part of me As much as a gem is made from a stone My decision to love 'til death due us part Shall conquer any differences that we may have I will seek the desires of your heart And hold your hand throughout this earthly path I prayed that you would be my gift from God Who planted the seed of your love for me By the way you deny me nothing at all No doubt in my mind, you were made for me�
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Reviewed by Alexandre Arnau	7/10/2005

this rhymed okay, but try not to go more than 10 syllables per line. other than that, this was very generic fare.




Reviewed by Sandie Angel	7/10/2005

Hi Johnnie: Thank you very much to allow me to give you suggestions. This poem is of sentimental value, and yes by all means, give this to your co-worker as a wedding or anniversary gift; but if I may (without being offensive) suggest to you the following amendments. On the 1st line of the 3rd stanza: "You are my second half that makes me complete" - in my opinion, it should read: "You are my other half that makes me complere" (this is because your co-worker and his/her spouse are supposed to be of equal partners in a marriage, there is no 1st or 2nd place - only 2 halves in a marriage). On the 1st line of the 4th stanza - the word "due" should be "do"; On the last line of the 4th stanza - "holf" should be "hold". Hope this helps. Once again thank you for allowing me to give my suggestions. Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)




Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)	7/10/2005

Don't know where you need quotation marks n this poem. Nice poem, but those sentiments went out the window when the divorce lawyers were able to advertise. LOL Oh, "And holf your hand throughout this earthly path" (Should be half, not holf.)




Reviewed by Tinka Boukes	7/10/2005

Beautiful delivery!! One suggestion...be aware of Plagiarism...use qoutation marks when ever something sound remotely similar to someone elses words. This poem did sound very "Known" to me!! Just me helping out a fello family member....no offence!! For the poem...well written and a beautiful heart shows!! Love Tinka