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I love you more than the love loves you.
by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Monday, July 11, 2005
Rated "G" by the Author.
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A song inspired by the death.

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Will you miss me
and cry
if I wave you
goodbye from the sky?
Or will you laugh
at my fate
and cuddle up
with another guy.

Tell me baby.
Tell me the truth.
I love you
more than the,
love loves you.

Will you think about me
and burn your core?
Or will you
saunter on the path
of your life,
sans dropping
those reminiscence tears.

Tell me baby.
Tell me the truth.
I love you
more than the,
love loves you.

Will you sing our duet
and stammer at times,
if you feel my voice
dipping down from the sky?
Or will you
just keep singing on,
overlapping my part
with his thoughts.

Tell me baby.
Tell me the truth.
I love you
more than the,
love loves you.

Will you dream
about me at times,
and turn blue
when you realize
the truth?
Or will you
regard those glorious
moments we shared together
as the rush of the boat
upon the gushing
waves of time.

Tell me baby.
Tell me the truth.
I love you
more than the,
love loves you.

Will you wave your hand
and salute me
with your smiles,
if you see me
amongst the stars
dipping glory drops?
Or will you
close your eyes.
and run towards
the harbor of his arms.

Tell me baby.
Tell me the truth.
I love you
more than the,
love loves you.

Will you say my prayers
every night, amid the
mist of the moonlight?
Or will you
fill your cup
with the wine of change
brewed in your heart
and toast with the god.

Tell me baby.
Tell me the truth.
I love you
more than the,
love loves you.

Will you perform
my last rites?
Or will you
chop my body
into pieces
and scatter them
amongst the birds of prey.

Tell me baby.
Tell me the truth.
I love you
more than the,
love loves you.


Copyright 2005 Bhuwan Thapaliya.

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Reviewed by Jennifer Butler 7/15/2005
Very beautiful, and you made me cry so early in the morning.
Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga 7/15/2005
Dear Bhuwan,

You certainly managed to evoke tears with this beautiful yet very poignant write. I guess the questions can only be answered by the love that was, the character of the person and of course the relationship. Exceptional Bhuwan.

warm hugs
Elga
Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen 7/13/2005
We must all let go and confront the great mystery of "beyond death," Bhuwan. And those we leave behind must carry on with their earth-bound lives.
Profound emotion in this beautifully expressed write.
Peace,
Carolyn
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 7/11/2005
Powerful write and a great song. Good job, Bhuwan!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 7/11/2005
I love you
more than the,
love loves you.

That's one powerful love, Bhuwan, and this is quite a song!

Reviewed by Sue Hess 7/11/2005
great song
Reviewed by E T Waldron 7/11/2005
Deep feelings is this superb poem that we all can relate to Bhuwan!
I'm sure we all wonder these things. When there is such total love as you describe, it matters much more. Always a pleasure to read you
my friend!

Love,
Eileen
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 7/11/2005
Stunning love song with very deep meaning Bhuwan!!

You are the best!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 7/11/2005
Reads like a love song, Bhuwan. This leaves no doubt as to the emotions within the verses. Thank you. Love and peace to you. Regis
Reviewed by Letitia Blount 7/11/2005
Bhuwan, it is such a pleasure to read this poem. the line 'I love you more than the love loves you' totally blew me away. Thanks so much for sharing I have to go tell my gurls about this one.
Inner Peace,
Letitia
Reviewed by M. B. 7/11/2005
Baby, I'm telling you the truth, I LOVE YOU portrays a yearning so deep and vast one can drown in it.

Great line:
I love you more than the love loves you

This is a beautiful piece, Bhuwan! It's great to be reading you again!

~Mari
Reviewed by Kenny Baez 7/11/2005
searching poem, inquiry into love a hard task. k
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