Debby J Rosenberg, click here
to update your web pages on AuthorsDen.
i looked at my notes and my life
and refreshed my thoughts
and i wasnít sure if it was perception
or awareness that was becoming
i find it hard to explain
the realization of the creation
the poems i had written
back in the beginning
i find iíve been living
in a physical expression
and noticed the delayed reaction
as it was merging along with
the collective collection
in a more immediate manifestation
and yet as experiencing this living being
there were unexpected subplots
i could not explain of origin
an agitation of the design
no longer my own creation
i pondered influence
i wondered about a beginning
therefore its endless momentum
so now iíve come full circle
and i canít keep my eyes off of you
Want to review or comment on this
Click here to login!
Need a FREE Reader Membership?
Click here for your Membership!
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|This is SOoo TErriFic! Debb :) Keep on, on and on-WRiting till the break of DAwn. YOu have in you and it shows magificent like a shooting star- *( I feel a poem coming on, more notes to jot down ) I bet your re-freshment of your newer ways, took almost all day~~~ it was needed, I'm sure that's why it occured-WArmly,Sheee|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Well composed and delivered!!
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|A truly interesting write, Debby, especially your ending.|