|Reviewed by June Thompson
|I wait for the tide
Day and night
Nothing do I hide
As is my rite
At least for the moment
At least for the time
For I am spent
Tired of rhyme
I wish it would call me
On some dismal days
But ah tis only me
Who can burn in those suns rays
I have to look up myself
I have taken the path already
I've sat upon the shelf
And I guess I just wasn't ready
Here I am forever to stay
No matter what happens to me
They just have this way
Of reminding me that I am Free
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Nice thoughts, Stevie. If indeed... Love and peace to you. Regis|
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Wonderful pic and a fantastic write as ever from you my friend....BHUWAN!!|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Beautiful reflection of being you....and I can only say Yes I understand your feelings, emotions and can relate with it all!!
Have a great day poet...your pen is powerful!!
Ps; Very nice picture of the man behind these words!!
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|This photo is a good one of yours.
You can also sing a song with your poems. Heehee! Good write!
Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Yes Steve I can see that being the case and maybe I'll end up joining you with my guitar in hand and a song on my lips we could make enough to pay for lunch lol. Great story here.
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|I find I cannot always be funny
Just as the sky is not always sunny <------ nice touch Steve- it's True! To help others to stop and think, is a good thing. Helps in their growth on their knowledge-This poem is Saddddddd but, FAR well Understood! :) YOu on a Street cornier smiling at ever passerby- I can see it now.. and you WOULD make a bundle- w/ a horse throat and all-YOUr sweet kindness shows through LOUD and Clear! Hope your day was a sweet one- WArm HuGs2U-Lady, SheeeOX P.s. YOur pict. is a nice touch- Handsome and kind- YOU look like a Gentle Soul filled with Wisdom- Sweet Dreamszzzzz-