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Lather of Dreams
by Lisa Hilbers
Friday, July 15, 2005
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Lather of Dreams

Waves of cool blue satin; Whispering against
my thighs- Faint moans, dawn my parting
lips- Succulent kisses; Sweet eyes
closing softly- Lay with me now; This night;
Cover me with your sizzling moist flesh-
Lust needs company; And I long to
be yours

Tease tenderly; Pulsing fingers dance;
Your tongue found my neck; Oh, so candy sweet;
You lift; I rise to meet; Biting with
the desire to taste- Red painted nails
tip-toe your spine

Thrills overpower; Chills enthrall;
The strong arm of must takes hold- I move;
You guide and relax; I massage the
ache you feel- You need- You want-
You crave; and I hand feed your
beastly hungers

Will crumbles; Now self-infliction is
the pastels of sin; Tinted by moonlight; Shadowed
by pleasure; Fortitude dripping in musk-
Muscles tighten; Walls inhale to
contain the excitement

I wake to the sound of running water;
and join you in a lather of

Lisa Hilbers

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Reviewed by Joe Fleckenstein 8/5/2005
Beautiful words and images, in particular the last stanza. --Joe :-)

Reviewed by F William Broome 7/18/2005
Hey, this is good! Very well done. I'm trying to cool down, but you owe me... my monitor turned to syrup in a massive meltdown! ! ! !
- Bill
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 7/17/2005
Absolutely beautiful, I just love your poetry,

Reviewed by jude forese 7/16/2005
erotic beauty flows from your heart ... exceptional poetry that makes us all vicariously experience the wonder, enchantment and excitation of dream's heated lather ... luv the title ...
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 7/16/2005
Got me in a lather...

Reviewed by Sandra Mushi 7/15/2005
An intense erotic write oozing with lust and passion! Absolutely amazing beautiful! Hot!

God bless,

Reviewed by E T Waldron 7/15/2005
Lisa you took the word hot to a new high ;-) Wow!
I agree with Sherry smooth erotica!

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg 7/15/2005
Reviewed by Sherry Heim 7/15/2005
With the term "erotica," I generally ecpect to find a little coarseness, but not in this erotic poem. This is a beautiful, arrousing, heart pumping and temperature rising,poem as sweet as true love itself. Gorgous write, my friend, and an amazing contrast, in content, to your earlier post today.
Take care,
Reviewed by M. B. 7/15/2005
People with high blood pressure should not read this.

Delicious and enthralling!!

Reviewed by Felix Perry 7/15/2005
Hot hot hot and man Lisa this one sure perks up a man on a warm summers evening, had me hanging on every word and the clarity of your images made me feel like a voyeur at your bedroom window (by the way nice thong you took off lol just kidding. This was one hell of a beautiful, passionate write that transcends erotica. Well done.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray 7/15/2005
Thorougly erotic and passionate; thank you for sharing this gift, Lisa. Love and peace to you. Regis
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 7/15/2005

Your words have succeeded in melting my monitor and raised the temp about a thousand degrees...dang, it's HOT in herre! LOL Very effective, passionate write--well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 7/15/2005

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 7/15/2005
My eyes never wavered from the screen and words as I sat, spellbound by the intensity of this poem of lust and love. For what is lust but not love of the moment? And what is love without lust for the kicker? You took us on a ride, cleaned us up for dreams of another time. Some people can write erotic and then there are those who can write EROTIC poetry. You belong to the latter.
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