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  A Bowl Of Soup
by William Bonilla
Saturday, July 16, 2005
Rated "PG13" by the Author.

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As she freshen up
Ready to meet the day
I placed A Bowl Of Soup
Upon the table
My lunch
For a split second
I felt strange within
A moment of lonelines
Stabbed me in my heart
saw myself alone
Without her by my side.

All as I ready myself
For A Bowl Of Soup
My lunch
I am unable to find words
To describe those feelings
That must have exit
From the darkess pit
Of an abyss within
I disregarded The Bowl Of Soup
Lost my appetite
Had no lunch.

As she blew dried her hair
I gently engulfed her
Within a loving embrace
From behind
Kissing her tenderly on the softness
Of her neck and shoulders
What's that all about?
She uttered softly.

I just whispered
"I love you" as I sighed
A tear
Rolled down my eyes.

By: D'Artagnan
William Bonilla
07/15/05

























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Reviewed by Cathy Delaleu 2/16/2007
I enjoyed this very much, it was sweet and wonderful for it keeps the reader wanting more
Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader) 7/30/2005
This is such a wonderful poem. It really brings so much to life and the treasures of each day. Amazing how something we do everyday one day bothers us and wakes us up to the treasures of today.
Fantastic and loving awakening poem.
Tracey
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 7/21/2005
It's so real it hurts, William. Thank you. Love and peace to you. Regis
Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen 7/20/2005
when push comes to shove, we really are all alone in this existence... wonderful capture, William! now go heat up that bowl of soup and enjoy!
very best,
Carolyn
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 7/20/2005
Like no other, you really do hit the parts we can not...

Well done
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 7/18/2005
William,

So poignant...so delicate...so private a moment...softly captured through your words. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 7/18/2005
A perfect tender moment William, written with love...

Peace and love, Carole
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 7/17/2005
This was so lovely William, very beautiful!

Reindeer
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 7/17/2005
Okay this brought tears to my eyes...this is so tender...but bleeds at the same time!!

Hope you know what I mean!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 7/17/2005
A truly powerful 'slice of life,' piece, William.
Reviewed by Sandra Mushi 7/16/2005
Ooh William, this is such a beautiful write! Excellent passionate write! I love how you wrote on appreciation and acknowledgement for your loved one, using a simple deed.

God bless,

Sandie.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 7/16/2005
So poignant William, wanting the closeness of another body, food can always wait. Excellent poem!

Eileen
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 7/16/2005
I am sure as well another tear did find its way out of her eyes too...another pretty one, Bill...Ed
Reviewed by Marilyn Seray 7/16/2005
All from a bowl of soup. sometimes the simplest or oddest things can trigger tears. A moment of fear but thankful that there's someone that you love and trust is there.
Very soft and emotional write.
Reviewed by Sherry Heim 7/16/2005
Such bittersweetness flows from your verses, William.
Take care,
Sherry
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