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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
7/18/2005 |
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Alex,
Why not do the same thing to her as she did to her son? God, how awful. Why are these women (I refuse to call them mothers) having children, only to abuse them and worse?? Sick, sick, sick...
Thank you for having the courage to face the ugliness running amok in society...and for forcing us to confront the demons in control. Shattering write--effectively penned.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
"all this and more
all this and more" how about, NEVER MORE!!!????????? |
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| Reviewed by Leysa Lowery |
7/18/2005 |
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| Giving birth does not a mother make ... she is the stuff of nightmares. Well said. |
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| Reviewed by Sue Hess |
7/18/2005 |
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| i agree they call it munchausen's by proxy but i call is sick...they should do it to her |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
7/17/2005 |
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| emotionally potent ... hopefully, the media has it wrong ... if not, what a totally repugnant act to do to anyone, especially to one's own child ... |
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| Reviewed by Sara Coslett |
7/17/2005 |
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| That was raw, pure hatred. The opening paragraph, where you tell us what this wretched woman did, reviled me to think that someone could do that to anyone, let alone their own child. The poem reached right into my head and pulled out all of the things I was feeling. ~ Sara |
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| Reviewed by Patricia Gomes |
7/17/2005 |
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| A poet needs to make his audience feel what he's feeling; the emotion MUST transfer from the page to the mind. It's that whole "show versus tell" thing. You, sir, are very successful with this piece. Whether she 's guilty or not, I'm able to "feel" your rage and for that I am applauding your work. Excellent! |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
7/17/2005 |
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| This is not a time to hold back your thoughts on the matter. Only when you completely explain how you feel about this woman will you feel better. So, come on, say what's on your mind. |
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| Reviewed by Sandra Mushi |
7/16/2005 |
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Whoa, Alexandre! Such a rage! You portrayed what you are feeling so well!! Its so sad that a mother can go to such an extend to get rid of her own flesh and blood! Whatever made her commit such an inhuman deed?!
God bless, Alexandre!
Sandie. |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
7/16/2005 |
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| And if that ain't enough, she lives in Delaware...hopefully that is where she will also die, slowly by lethal feces injection...Ed |
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