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  Montezuma's Gold
by Mr. Ed
Sunday, July 17, 2005
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“Nothing remains
but flowers and sad songs
In
Mexico now
Where once there were
Warriors and wise men”


 

An Ancient Aztec Poem

 

 

This captivating eerie tale begins in the early 1500s

In a gigantic metropolis located way down in old Mexico

And many believe it will one day end in a red rock Utah canyon

In a cleverly hidden underground chamber still brimming with gold

 

When Cortez and his Spanish conquistadors arrived in Mexico

They were extremely startled to find a very advanced civilization

They soon did their best to subjugate and enslave the Aztec people

And tales of vast gold fortunes they heard soon filled them with elation

 

At first they had been made more than welcome by these ancient Aztecs

Who had initially believed them to be emissaries from the ancient gods

But before long the Aztecs realized that these Spaniards were mere mortals

Very intent on overpowering and stealing from them so they were soon at odds

 

Before he died the great Aztec leader Montezuma developed a plan

To sneak their vast golden fortune out of old Mexico in the dead of night

And many over the years have claimed they know where this treasure is buried

But what they’ve seen in its secret chambers has filled them with horror and fright

 

Mysterious Aztec symbols have been found throughout southern Utah

Leading many to believe that somewhere underground here lies this treasure

And through the centuries many have eagerly searched for it everywhere

But what they claim to have found has brought them anything but pleasure

 

Some claim that they have solved ancient riddles and clever clues

Leading them to an immense underground cave in Utah near Kanab

But when they’ve crawled into this dark cavern they are soon accosted

By ancient Aztec warrior spirits who after centuries will not let them rob

 

Others claim that this ancient Aztec golden fortune can be cleverly located

By finding its secret canyon entrance which is pinpointed by the sun or moon

But those swearing that they’ve somehow managed to enter the first chamber

Are soon attacked and choked by ghostly demons making them dizzily swoon

 

I very recently met a grizzled old prospector in a tiny backroads tavern in Utah

Who claimed that he found this buried gold after 30 years but it he could not rob

He swore when he very bravely trekked down the cavern’s dark golden staircase

He too was attacked by frightening spirits in this underground cavern near Kanab

 

As I stood here below this ancient red rock canyon in the eerie moonlight in Utah

Watching the brilliant moonbeam possibly marking my passage to glory and to fame

I suddenly began wondering if I too was becoming obsessed with Montezuma’s Gold


And wondering if I’d return here myself attempting to solve this ancient deadly game


 

©2005, Ed Kostro

 

 

The center of the ancient Aztec civilization was the immense Valley of Mexico, where Mexico City now stands, and their vast empire of 15 million people included 500 cities and dozens of ancient roads spanning hundreds of miles in every direction. 

 

And their story is one of the most remarkable tales in world history. The Aztecs were a small unknown group of people who journeyed into Mexico in the 12th century, and who rose to be the greatest power in the Americas by the time the Spaniards arrived here in the 16th century.

 

Unfortunately, little is known of their origins since they didn’t keep written records, but legend has it that they came from an island called Aztlan, meaning White Place or The Place of Herons. They believed that they were the ‘chosen ones,’ and they left Aztlan, which they described as a great island with seven sacred temples, eagerly searching for their new promised land.

 

Most historians believe that Aztlan was located north of Mexico somewhere on the North American continent.  Some, however, believe that Aztlan may have actually been the lost continent of Atlantis.

 

The most familiar figure in Aztec history is Montezuma II, their leader at the time of the Spanish conquest of Mexico.

 

In June 1520, the Aztecs were growing extremely restless under this new Spanish control and finally revolted against them. And soon, fearful that they would overpower his Spanish troops, Cortez took Montezuma hostage. He also immediately called upon Montezuma to quell this uprising, but the Aztec ruler was stoned to death while addressing his now disgruntled subjects.

 

But before Montezuma died, he allegedly instructed his warriors to sneak away and bury their vast gold fortune before the Spaniards could get their hands on it – and to guard it with their lives until he returned.

 

Many believe that this great Aztec ‘golden caravan’ headed northeast into Mexico’s extremely rugged Sierra Madre Mountains, where it is now lost forever.

 

Many others, however, believe that these Aztecs journeyed northwest, hundreds of miles further, through ancient Anasazi territory, finally secreting their gold fortune somewhere in a hidden red rock canyon in Utah.

 

Proponents of this theory point to puzzling petroglyphs and pictographs found throughout southern Utah that have mysterious Aztec symbols etched on them.

 

Could these cryptic drawings really be the clues to the whereabouts of Montezuma’s Gold, by many estimates worth over $4 Billion?  And could these fantastic tales of ancient Aztec ghosts that have been told by numerous treasure hunters over the years be true ?

 

You Decide.

 

But wherever it is, if it truly exists - it’s still out there somewhere – waiting to be found – perhaps even being guarded by ancient Aztec Spirits, who diligently await the return of ‘The Chosen Ones.’

 

 

 
 

 


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Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 7/18/2005
Ed,

Marvelous! I have always been fascinated by the Mayan culture, and you present it beautifully here. Muchas gracias, amigo--

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

When in Mexico in February, I did not look for gold--I was afraid of offending the Mayan gods, who are fierce, I've heard...LOL
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 7/18/2005
Another fascinating write Ed, thank you for sharing...

Peace, Carole
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 7/18/2005
They used to queue for miles to have their hearts cut out, to give to the sun.

The gold is yet to be found.
Well written buddy boy, guess Emily is having her way right now...
Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga 7/18/2005
Dear Ed,

Wonderfully written with a fountain of super information, always so interesting to read your great work. As for your returning,

"Every human being has,
like Socrates, an attendant spirit;
and wise are they who obey its signals.
If it does not always tell us what to do,
it always cautions us what not to do.
Author: Lydia M. Child 1802-1880"

warm hugs
Elga
Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson 7/17/2005
Enjoyed this immensely Ed, but I must say...some things are not meant to be, and I think that this is just but one of the many secrets that the now silent past protects.

Allen
Reviewed by Handsum Hart 7/17/2005
packed with good info, a most educational write

peace
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 7/17/2005
thanks for another spell binding write!
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 7/17/2005
Well, as you are sooooooo old, maybe the spirits will think you are actually Montezuma returning for his gold...LOL! If you do find it, remember you are my "twin" brother, though I am MUCH younger...;) Ed
Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg 7/17/2005
i'm enjoying your storytelling...
Reviewed by m j hollingshead 7/17/2005
nicely done
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 7/17/2005
Thanks for another very nice story/poem!!

Oh I learn so much by reading your work...about places and

people I had no idea even excisted!!

Thank You my mate!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Marilyn Seray 7/17/2005
Tales or not, this was very informative and well written!
Reviewed by E T Waldron 7/17/2005
Ed a fascinating poetic/tale so beautifully written! I love the pic and music too. The Humphrey Bogart film Sierra Madre was about the gold. Of course there were many books/films made about it. You however bring it to life again, and I'm thinking of going to Utah
in the fall just to see the site.;-) No digging for me hahaha, I'll leave that to you, Rebecca and turbo...;-) TL
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 7/17/2005
Interesting graphic.

Ron
Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle 7/17/2005
I agree with Jude, your historical writings are always very educational and thought-provoking. I always enjoy them. This one is no exception. I always loved reading about the Aztecs and Montezuma's reign during History class in school and since, I have searched for books written about that era. I guess I must truly be an educational 'nerd' but it truly fascinates me.
Great write!!
Jill
Reviewed by jude forese 7/17/2005
you certainly have made you claim on historic poetry ... i always look forward to read yours ...
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU 7/17/2005


"Montezuma's Gold"... A flash of history that stimulates minds
and creates clouds of wealth's dreams.

This piece leads one to the multicolor skies of imagination and
brings one back to think on social injustices.

Great work, Poet!


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) 7/17/2005
A civilization story marvelously written by the pen of a master story-teller. You refreshed my mind with memories I though have already collapsed. The Aztecs and the lost continent of Atlantis were my favorite history lessons way back in the 70's. I think Somalis have similar behaviours with the kingdoms that have fought over the control of Mexico: they were anarchic and at last perished. Thanks eddie. Always a pleasure to read you.

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik 7/17/2005
"...wondering if I’d return here myself attempting to solve this ancient deadly game"

Hmmmmmmm... the answer to that, little eddie, is: Is the Pope Catholic? (grin)

I've watched documentaries on this and similar topics and it really is so fascinating. Your delivery enhances these with lively and personal info... always a pleasure. katy xox
Reviewed by George Carroll 7/17/2005
Wonderful poem and story of a civilization little is known of. But what about this revenge I hear about. Just don't drink water in Mexico or you'll soon find out. Montezuma has the last laugh.
Reviewed by Patricia Gomes 7/17/2005
Having an obsession with the Aztecs, your title drew me in. I'm so glad it did; I enjoyed the read tremendously.
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