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One Tequila, Two Tequila, Three Tequila, FLOOR
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Monday, July 18, 2005
Rated "G" by the Author.
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*grins*

Good Lord. All this time, I've been spelling "Caribbean" wrong...oooops. LOL

Maybe I've had one too many tequilas....


Palm trees raise their heads
and dare  the storm
to ruin their night:
they dance on the wind
of a hurricane,
snapping their fronds to
funky
      Caribbean
                   beats,
drinking refreshment
pouring from the skies
in great abundance.
On occasion, one
loses his bal
                 ance,
and falls to the floor ...
TOO MUCH PARTY TIME,
not enough sense to
stay out of the rain.

(c) 2005, Karla Dorman.

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Reviewed by Joe Fleckenstein 8/5/2005
If I'm ever caught in a hurricane again, I will always think of this poem! I particularly liked lines 7 to 9 (including "funky Caribbean beats.") When I first saw the title of the poem, I was expecting a wild drinking story, from someone's college days. :-) Joe

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader) 7/19/2005
Karla I love this this is such a unique way to look at storms. That Mexican vacation really stayed with ya.
I was wondering how you could do three shots of tequlia. Me and Jose yep and he won Never will our paths meet again. One mean and nasty dude.
I really really like your poem. So it's 2 b's?? Learn something new everyday. Thanks Teach!!(c :)
Traceyxoox42
Reviewed by Sandra Mushi 7/19/2005
Excellent ... hik hik ... write, Karla!! Lol!

God bless,

Sandie.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 7/19/2005
well done...I think there are more that one word I spell wrongly....but I am a pro n that...so who cares...lol!!

Love Tinka :)
Reviewed by m j hollingshead 7/19/2005
well said
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 7/19/2005
This was excellent Karla! Loved this poem!

Reindeer
Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson 7/19/2005
Delightful! I love the poem and its title!
Reviewed by Elaine Carey 7/19/2005
Karla, I love this! Great imagery. Very playful and fun.
Reviewed by Cynth'ya cynthyaspeaks@gmail.com 7/19/2005
I'm just praying that the storm passes over quickly. And what a way you have of confronting the realities of life with a whimsical title and poem to follow.

blessin's and (((hugs))), and lots of prayers,
cynth'ya
Reviewed by jude forese 7/19/2005
watch out ... too much tequlia in a hurricane can make you air-borne ;)
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 7/18/2005
Lush....LOL, Ed
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 7/18/2005
This is a delightful, humorus take on the big blow...love it Karla!

Peace, Carole
Reviewed by Aberjhani 7/18/2005
A witty, "funky," and picturesque write. Enjoyed it immensely.
Reviewed by A PAX 7/18/2005
lol
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 7/18/2005
Your so creative these days..
Hope life is being go0d to you Karla
Your friend Ron......
Reviewed by Felix Perry 7/18/2005
Great write and great comparison and so well matched to photo. GOod job Karla.

Felix
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 7/18/2005
Hi Karla:

The picture and your words captured the storm very well. Wow!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Brian Pellerino 7/18/2005
Karla,

A howling good write. I like the perspective. Well done...maybe a name change to "hurricane heroine"?

Peace and (((Hugs)))

B
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 7/18/2005
Weather Gone Wild!

Stay Out Of The Rain Write On Right!

TRASK
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 7/18/2005
Those wild palm trees can get out of hand once in awhile - just like the rest of us!
Reviewed by E T Waldron 7/18/2005
Fantastic capture mz Karla poet! I really love this one! I've been praying for you guys hearing the weather reports, and that horny swampman Jerry too;-)! LOL Great write!

Eileen
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 7/18/2005
WOW!! Your old gray cells were working overtime to compose this little treat. Very good. Gotta love it.
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 7/18/2005
This is a wonderful and humorous write, thank you for sharing
God Bless
Michelle!
Reviewed by Sue Hess 7/18/2005
wonderful take on the weather in florida and vicinity, karla
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 7/18/2005
(((Karla)))

Clever word play and form; love the sense of humor in this! Hurricanes aren't funny, but this poem is, and it is nothing short of brilliant! BRAVA!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D *grins*



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