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A Siren's Song
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Wednesday, July 20, 2005
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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Feeling a bit...ummmmm...LOL

i come to you,
fresh ...
wet ...
and smelling of the sea -
gaze into the
mysteries of my eyes
and hear the songs
only for you, my love:
come taste the salt
to be kissed from my lips;
let your fingers
white beaches of my skin;
come find the sun
rise on coral nipples;
hidden treasures
wait to be discovered ...
we will dance on
orgasmic ecstasy,
if only you
me on the turquoise seas.

(c) 2005, Karla Dorman.


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Reviewed by Hilding Lindquist
Its sensuality pulls me through and the words flowed smoothly in sync with the theme ... well done!

Hilding "Gus" lindquist
Reviewed by Roger Ochs
a tasteful bit of erotica - well done
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
I guess you are feeling a bit...ummmmm! Quite a poem, and a most captivating graphic, Karla.
Reviewed by m j hollingshead
well done
Reviewed by Mary Quire
Nicely done.
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Damn women, all alike, all that got on their minds is that little three letter word...Ed
Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Absolutely georgous and oh so naughty...just love it girl, way to go!

Peace and love, Carole
Reviewed by E. Richardson
hehehehehe...methinks I know what is on your mind, Lady Buckeye...something to do with pollenation, right?...hehehehehee. All kidding aside, this is very good...delightfully sensual and the pic is perfect...not at all offensive.
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
I think there's something in the water, that all the ladies in the den have drunk today.

Very hot write. Even Zues missed the boat.. Musta been playing with his Venus..
Reviewed by Debby & Gordon Rosenberg
sensual like hot summer breezes - what are you thinking about? LOL
Reviewed by Sherry Heim
This is absolutely gorgeous! You created strong images and emotions. Very nicely done!!
Take care,
Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Well, My goodness Karla! What a poem this is. I love the words, setting and visuals!
Reviewed by Michael Ault
My...being an ex-sailor it speaks to me...

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
Dear Karla,

hehehehe now I understand ... mmmmmmm sensual softness :)

Must be something in the air lol.

This is absolutely stunning, very passionate oozing with sensuality.

warm hugs
p.s. Thanks for the word of caution, ...ooooo the vision of you gracefully "gliding" across the bed, enough to make me laugh without the satin sheets... :-D "wicked" lol.
Reviewed by Sandra Mushi
Whoa, its getting hot in here! Karla!!!! Darn, I never knew you could erotica like this! This is so sensual and sizzling hot! i doubt if the a/c will be enough for me ... whoa!!!

God bless, girl!!

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Ahhhh, written in true siren form. Very seductive Karla. ~ Sara
Reviewed by Huda Orfali
Wow, erotic, hot, a very beautiful one
thanks for sharing
love and peace
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Wow must be the heat of summer so many beautiful passionate and erotic writes like this one on here, my head is spinning with lust and your words just kicked it up another notch. Well written Karla.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
woo hoo we have a new sex kitten in the den, and boy can she write!
Watch out guys Karla's ready to roar!;-) Way to go poet! Show em your stuff!

Love, Eileen
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Oh boy I see the sea got to you!!

Pretty amazing Karla!!

Naughty girl!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Whoa, baby, you melted my monitor (not to mention, my GLASSES!)~ LOL

GODAMIGHTY, what a hot, HOT write; me thinks you need another cruise so you can cool off! Outstanding, erotic write; brava! You raised the bar on this one!! *CLAPPING*

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D *WHEW!*
Reviewed by Brian Pellerino

Ahem...I had to cover my own ears while I was reading this. Feeling a mite Randy are we? Nicely done.

Peace and (((Hugs)))

B (for blushing)
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Haha! You're feeling a bit. . . . ummmmm, huh? Well I do belive that your projected that ummmmm feeling quite well within the construction of the poem.
Reviewed by Sue Hess
sexy and pretty at the same time, you did this very well, and i know the feeling
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