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A Siren's Song
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Wednesday, July 20, 2005
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Feeling a bit...ummmmm...LOL

i come to you,
fresh ...
wet ...
and smelling of the sea -
gaze into the
deep
blue
mysteries of my eyes
and hear the songs
i
sing
only for you, my love:
come taste the salt
that
begs
to be kissed from my lips;
let your fingers
stroll
the
white beaches of my skin;
come find the sun
that
will
rise on coral nipples;
hidden treasures
lie
in
wait to be discovered ...
we will dance on
waves
of
orgasmic ecstasy,
if only you
will
join
me on the turquoise seas.

(c) 2005, Karla Dorman.

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Reviewed by Hilding Lindquist	7/22/2005

Its sensuality pulls me through and the words flowed smoothly in sync with the theme ... well done! Gus Hilding "Gus" lindquist




Reviewed by Roger Ochs	7/21/2005

a tasteful bit of erotica - well done




Reviewed by Mr. Ed	7/21/2005

I guess you are feeling a bit...ummmmm! Quite a poem, and a most captivating graphic, Karla.




Reviewed by m j hollingshead	7/21/2005

well done




Reviewed by Mary Quire	7/21/2005

Nicely done.




Reviewed by Ed Matlack	7/20/2005

Damn women, all alike, all that got on their minds is that little three letter word...Ed




Reviewed by Carole Mathys	7/20/2005

Absolutely georgous and oh so naughty...just love it girl, way to go! Peace and love, Carole




Reviewed by E. Richardson	7/20/2005

hehehehehe...methinks I know what is on your mind, Lady Buckeye...something to do with pollenation, right?...hehehehehee. All kidding aside, this is very good...delightfully sensual and the pic is perfect...not at all offensive.




Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)	7/20/2005

I think there's something in the water, that all the ladies in the den have drunk today. Very hot write. Even Zues missed the boat.. Musta been playing with his Venus..




Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg	7/20/2005

sensual like hot summer breezes - what are you thinking about? LOL




Reviewed by Sherry Heim	7/20/2005

This is absolutely gorgeous! You created strong images and emotions. Very nicely done!! Take care, Sherry




Reviewed by Marilyn Seray	7/20/2005

Well, My goodness Karla! What a poem this is. I love the words, setting and visuals!




Reviewed by Michael Ault	7/20/2005

My...being an ex-sailor it speaks to me... Mike




Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga	7/20/2005

Dear Karla, hehehehe now I understand ... mmmmmmm sensual softness :) Must be something in the air lol. This is absolutely stunning, very passionate oozing with sensuality. warm hugs Elga p.s. Thanks for the word of caution, ...ooooo the vision of you gracefully "gliding" across the bed, enough to make me laugh without the satin sheets... :-D "wicked" lol.




Reviewed by Sandra Mushi	7/20/2005

Whoa, its getting hot in here! Karla!!!! Darn, I never knew you could erotica like this! This is so sensual and sizzling hot! i doubt if the a/c will be enough for me ... whoa!!! God bless, girl!! Sandie.




Reviewed by Sara Coslett	7/20/2005

Ahhhh, written in true siren form. Very seductive Karla. ~ Sara




Reviewed by Huda Orfali	7/20/2005

Wow, erotic, hot, a very beautiful one thanks for sharing love and peace Huda




Reviewed by Felix Perry	7/20/2005

Wow must be the heat of summer so many beautiful passionate and erotic writes like this one on here, my head is spinning with lust and your words just kicked it up another notch. Well written Karla. Felix




Reviewed by E T Waldron	7/20/2005

woo hoo we have a new sex kitten in the den, and boy can she write! Watch out guys Karla's ready to roar!;-) Way to go poet! Show em your stuff! Love, Eileen




Reviewed by Tinka Boukes	7/20/2005

Oh boy I see the sea got to you too....lol!! Pretty amazing Karla!! Naughty girl!! Love Tinka




Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado	7/20/2005

(((Karla))) Whoa, baby, you melted my monitor (not to mention, my GLASSES!)~ LOL GODAMIGHTY, what a hot, HOT write; me thinks you need another cruise so you can cool off! Outstanding, erotic write; brava! You raised the bar on this one!! CLAPPING (((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D WHEW!




Reviewed by Brian Pellerino	7/20/2005

Karla, Ahem...I had to cover my own ears while I was reading this. Feeling a mite Randy are we? Nicely done. Peace and (((Hugs))) B (for blushing)




Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)	7/20/2005

Haha! You're feeling a bit. . . . ummmmm, huh? Well I do belive that your projected that ummmmm feeling quite well within the construction of the poem.




Reviewed by Sue Hess	7/20/2005

sexy and pretty at the same time, you did this very well, and i know the feeling

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