|Reviewed by Hilding Lindquist
|Its sensuality pulls me through and the words flowed smoothly in sync with the theme ... well done!
Hilding "Gus" lindquist
|Reviewed by Roger Ochs
|a tasteful bit of erotica - well done|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|I guess you are feeling a bit...ummmmm! Quite a poem, and a most captivating graphic, Karla.|
|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|Reviewed by Mary Quire
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Damn women, all alike, all that got on their minds is that little three letter word...Ed|
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|Absolutely georgous and oh so naughty...just love it girl, way to go!
Peace and love, Carole
|Reviewed by E. Richardson
|hehehehehe...methinks I know what is on your mind, Lady Buckeye...something to do with pollenation, right?...hehehehehee. All kidding aside, this is very good...delightfully sensual and the pic is perfect...not at all offensive.|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|I think there's something in the water, that all the ladies in the den have drunk today.
Very hot write. Even Zues missed the boat.. Musta been playing with his Venus..
|Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
|sensual like hot summer breezes - what are you thinking about? LOL|
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|This is absolutely gorgeous! You created strong images and emotions. Very nicely done!!
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|Well, My goodness Karla! What a poem this is. I love the words, setting and visuals!|
|Reviewed by Michael Ault
|My...being an ex-sailor it speaks to me...
|Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
hehehehe now I understand ... mmmmmmm sensual softness :)
Must be something in the air lol.
This is absolutely stunning, very passionate oozing with sensuality.
p.s. Thanks for the word of caution, ...ooooo the vision of you gracefully "gliding" across the bed, enough to make me laugh without the satin sheets... :-D "wicked" lol.
|Reviewed by Sandra Mushi
|Whoa, its getting hot in here! Karla!!!! Darn, I never knew you could erotica like this! This is so sensual and sizzling hot! i doubt if the a/c will be enough for me ... whoa!!!
God bless, girl!!
|Reviewed by Sara Coslett
|Ahhhh, written in true siren form. Very seductive Karla. ~ Sara|
|Reviewed by Huda Orfali
|Wow, erotic, hot, a very beautiful one
thanks for sharing
love and peace
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Wow must be the heat of summer so many beautiful passionate and erotic writes like this one on here, my head is spinning with lust and your words just kicked it up another notch. Well written Karla.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|woo hoo we have a new sex kitten in the den, and boy can she write!
Watch out guys Karla's ready to roar!;-) Way to go poet! Show em your stuff!
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Oh boy I see the sea got to you too....lol!!
Pretty amazing Karla!!
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Whoa, baby, you melted my monitor (not to mention, my GLASSES!)~ LOL
GODAMIGHTY, what a hot, HOT write; me thinks you need another cruise so you can cool off! Outstanding, erotic write; brava! You raised the bar on this one!! *CLAPPING*
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D *WHEW!*
|Reviewed by Brian Pellerino
Ahem...I had to cover my own ears while I was reading this. Feeling a mite Randy are we? Nicely done.
Peace and (((Hugs)))
B (for blushing)
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Haha! You're feeling a bit. . . . ummmmm, huh? Well I do belive that your projected that ummmmm feeling quite well within the construction of the poem.|
|Reviewed by Sue Hess
|sexy and pretty at the same time, you did this very well, and i know the feeling|