|Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER
|Ah, I knew it all along Tinks! You needs a good spanking!Jasmin Horst|
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|I found this so naughty Tinky lol You did
a great job here. Loved it.
|Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
|um, who did that music behind your voice, miss tinka??? get at me, sis. i'll hook your achy breaky heart right on up.
but i'm lovin' your voice, and accent! nice write!
|Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
I agree with Sherry, it was wonderful hearing you read this! I am appluading!
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|I am glad I missed this when you posted it so that I could hear it for the first time in your own voice. I love the way you spoke this poem, Tinka, your verbal expressions made it that much easier to hear your heart and your emotions. Great job, you naughty girl you!
|Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
|Cute poem Tinka. you are so fun. Thanks., Here's a little wisdom to go along with your sentence there. Have fun and thanks 42xoox(c :)
When we drink, we get drunk.
When we get drunk, we fall asleep.
When we fall asleep, we commit no sin.
When we commit no sin, we go to heaven.
So, let's all get drunk, and go to heaven!
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Delightfully "naughty," Tinkasweets. Thanks for sharing. Love and peace. Regis|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Naughty Girls just wanna have fun!|
|Reviewed by Michael Charles Messineo
|Tinka, It is fun to see this other side of you. More More More!!!
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Hurt me hurt me said the masochist, not bloody likely said the sadist!|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|ooops, you did it again
a spanking is in the making
Cute write Tinka
William ......Peace & Love
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|What fun to be naughty, once in awhile, you go girl!|
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|YOu must have found something out Girl, by being naughty! This put a smile and lift in my heart Tink.... GREAT Poem here, and our you looking for resolution? YOu need to look inside deep--- BE careful my dear friend, Have FAith in you and your feelings, nomatter what they are? Hey, we on for that all together Next yr. cruise? Lets see how many we could round up Eh... I'm glad you smiled at the idea... WE can dream anyway and plan a goal... Take cARe Tink - and Write on, on and on my freind-BE Happy! How is your arm/spider? Now...? WArmly,Sheeeoxo -Plant a SEED and WATCH IT GRowwww-|
|Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
Wat gaan hier aan ??? ek verstan niks :( jys blerrie stout hehehehe.
en ja wel wat onderstaan... beteken die selfde hehehe ;)
Well... if it makes you happy and makes you smile, then you go girl, be as naughty as you want lol, a great write ;)
warm hugs and love
|Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez
Tinka my dear poetic friend,
not only is this poem well written, but the
the expressed subject's contents are remarkable!
Really good work ...keep it up!
Rich Criso Suarez
|Reviewed by Brian Pellerino
You're ruining this pure and chaste image I have of you. It's terribly fun to be naughty, though!
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
|Reviewed by Bianca Boonstra
|I enjoyed it a lot! Well done.|
|Reviewed by Leah Wilson
|Tinka (applauding) I loved it! Very humorous!|
|Reviewed by Roger Ochs
|Sometimes we are naughty in the hope that we'll get a spanking.|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Ahhhh Tinka we all need to be a little naughty once in a while, it is what keeps us young at heart and smiling in our eyes. Some of us are just a little naughtier then others that's all and I like it that way.lol
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|Fun read, Tinka|
|Reviewed by Sandra Mushi
|Tinka!!! Lol! Delightful write.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|You are naughty and nice;-) Good one Tinks!
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|A nikce lighthearted write. Ha Ha|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Delightfully wicked, delightfully fun--well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Naughty Girl #2 :)
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Reviewed by Aberjhani
|This is one seriously intriguing NAUGHTY GIRL poem and I think I had better leave it at that:-)|