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Damn the Torpedoes
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Thursday, July 21, 2005
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Britain, we stand united with you!

Metastisizing -
the disease is progressing
just as they have hoped;

spreading throughout the
body of humankind, the
bad cells are winning:

enrolling new cells
with promise of Paradise
to join in the Cause:

wiping infidels
from the face of the Planet
and instilling fear.

They think they have won
with each bomb that detonates
and each one that dies.

But there's a weapon
against this deadly cancer
of terrorism ...

It's called PERSITANCE.
It's called DETERMINATION.
*DAMN the torpedoes!!*

We will not give in;
we will continue to live ...
So, full speed, ahead!

(Shove that up yer arse.)

(c) 2005, Karla Dorman.

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Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)	7/23/2005

YES KARLA!! YES MA'AM!! Superb!! Bravo!! high five to you lady. xoox42 Tracey




Reviewed by Debra Brown (Reader)	7/22/2005

We will not give in; we will continue to live ... Truer words could not be said. Unifying write!




Reviewed by Regis Auffray	7/22/2005

It is time for our world to listen as ONE. Thank you, Karla. Love and peace. Regis




Reviewed by Mr. Ed	7/22/2005

Wonderful Solidarity Write, Karla.




Reviewed by F William Broome	7/22/2005

Right on - Karla! Your words are powerful and uniting. As old FDR told America after Pearl Harbor, "We have nothing to FEAR, but FEAR, itself! We'll whip these bastards - on their own terms, but it will take TIME, TIME, and more TIME! - Bill




Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)	7/22/2005

Solidarity, with disciplined dogged determination, between all the allies of America, Denmark, Norway, Japan and the good ole aussies. Yesterday could be a blessing as we now have four UXBs! We just gotta carry on. And not distrust our muslim friends, yet weed out the cowardly extreamists. One thing I learnt in America. Was the true love,caring friendship America has for us. Sadly we can't talk to those who want to play deaf. Sadly most of Europe is full of cowards, who will turn vultures once the allies win. Thanks special K...xx




Reviewed by Carole Mathys	7/21/2005

I so agree with Felix...I hope everyone is listening! Great write Karla... Peace, Carole




Reviewed by Sherry Heim	7/21/2005

I hope we finally get tough; let the Soldiers do the soldiering and the Generals do the generaling. Extract the politics and fight this war as the terrorists fight. NO HOLDS BARRED! Money and conversation are not going to heal this sickness that is trying to penetrate the free world. Take care, Sherry




Reviewed by Brian Pellerino	7/21/2005

Karla, Persistence and determination and progress. If we want to be free of this, we must grow beyond the need for it. Well written piece. Peace and (((Hugs))) B




Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado	7/21/2005

Let us fight this evil called terrorism and give those bastards what they REALLY deserve: a good game of WHUP ASS! Excellent write, Karla; brava! (((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(




Reviewed by Felix Perry	7/21/2005

Well said I hope the world is listening. Felix




Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)	7/21/2005

Yeah. There's a weapon all right. But the pandering governments of the world will never do the right thing. They still, after all that has happened, think that they can TALK to these bastards.




Reviewed by G M	7/21/2005

Well done , Karla. Powerful and poetic...a winning combo...good job! MG




Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga	7/21/2005

Dear Karla, They should devise an "Extremist Muslim seeking Torpedo" one way to eradicate the deadly cancer of terrorism... we can dream can't we? A powerful wirte Karla. Here's to Peace and understanding. warm hugs Elga




Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK	7/21/2005

Shove That Up Your Ass Right On Down Write!!!! TRASK




Reviewed by Sandra Mushi	7/21/2005

Amen! Against terrorism, united we stand! God bless, Karla! Sandie.




Reviewed by Tinka Boukes	7/21/2005

You tell them Karla!! Love Tinka




Reviewed by Peter Paton	7/21/2005

Good on you Karla ! One for all ! and all for one ! We must eliminate this scourge of Muslim Extremism in our midst ! Peter

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