|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Eerily fasinating, taking me in. Not knowing enough to sink or swim.
|Reviewed by Paul Williams
|A deep haunting and very moving write Lisa.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|This is an awesome poem Lisa as only you can write!
I'm left amazed at the depth of your gift.Outstanding!
|Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez
wow! really great piece here.
you are very talented , to say the very least.
keep up the great work.
peace and creativity',
Rich Criso Suarez
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
How many lose themselves, trying to see who, where, what they are.
|Reviewed by Sandra Mushi
|A very poignant, emotional write - deep and haunting! Well penned, Lisa!
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Strongly emotive write--very well penned!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|As always and excellent delivery from you Lisa!!
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|excellent write, lisa; as always, very well done! brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in burleson, karen lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|This write is nothing short of amazing, though I expect no less from your extremely gifted pen. You somehow have captured in words the feeling of panic as it grabs at us and steals our breath and courage from us. That moment of fear so deeply seated that we wonder if we will ever go on from there or if time will get stuck forever. I love this line:
"Somewhere in between tick; And the
forgotten sound of tock-"
It is the moment when our heart stops and the bottom drops out of our world. Excellent work, my Friend!
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|This is a deep and haunting look into your soul and the memories of the past. Well said and well presented. I must read this again cause it appears to have several layers. Well done Lisa,
|Reviewed by A. Keith Barton
|Very graphic and earthy; sensual in a dark way; especially like the discrete stopping of time and that moment of panic and horror that fear brings to all of us; nice write, Lisa.|