|Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
|LOVE that last one, Lori. My grandma lives on a farm with a barn just like that.|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Beautiful haiku, Lori. Each one stands on its own merit--BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
|Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
This is a lovely piece, I have one similar posted called 'Seasons', it's my one and only. This is more the Japanese version, no? I am sleepy, it's 5:46AM, lol. Mine is just the regular ole 5-7-5.
Take Care, Janny xoxoxo
|Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
Nice to be back and reading your wonderful work. These are amazing, but admittedly, the third one really touched me. Beautifully penned Lori.
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|You are a master of this artform, Lori. ~~Nordette|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|each haiku is an excellent visualization ...|
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Always great to read your ku's...
Hope life is being go0d to you Lori..
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
|As On The Vine Leans On Into Its Shadow-- Gone As Humanity Soon Will Be!
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|Hi Lori! I have missed your wonderful writes. These are all outstanding, though I like the last one the best. The visual in that one is fantastic.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Oh rules are made for one reason only...to break them yeah!!
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Each one is a gem of evocative poetry, Lori. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace. Regis|
|Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
|You know how, when you read something and out comes a completely involuntary gasp or sound of some kind, Lori? That's exactly what happened when I read that last verse... the barn leaning on its shadow... that's brilliant imagination... amazing expression! My other favorite was the first verse... very creative, peaceful bow to nature. All of it is just wonderful! katy xox.|
|Reviewed by A. Keith Barton
|Love the haiku--the seasonal references and nature's calling to us; great write, Lori|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Ahhhh Lori you have such a talented gift in your haikus...woberful
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Like them all, Lori, as well as the Basho quote!|
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|These are all great. I especially love the last one|
|Reviewed by Sandra Mushi
|Love all of them! Great haikus, Lori!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Lori, I always love your ku, The last one is an awesome choice of words to paint the perfect picture. Good to see you;-)
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Do ants get hungover?
Shakespeare in the park.
Must pop over and see that.