|Reviewed by email@example.com Bennett
|Your poetry gives on so m uch meaning that you have to recieve positive feedback from all that review. Thanks for sharing with me and many others here on the lovely Den.|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Deep dark and inticate write and the reader is drawn in and wants to offer compassion especially to the child.
|Reviewed by Paul Williams
|An excellent but sad capture, welcome to the den I look forward to reading more of your work.
|Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
|Oh my sweet, first off a huge welcome, I hope that you stay, you've got more talent in this one offering that 1,000 people that I've read, here, there and every-where. Stay strong and come out of the wilderness, much awaits you.
God Bless, Janny xoxoxo
|Reviewed by jude forese
|a very nicely developed poem/tale ...|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Sad, but an oft told tale.
|Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
Welcome to AD, may the "Newbie Poet" become a permanent and lasting member :)
This really moved me and left me with a heavy heart. So poignantly penned. I believe there must be nothing worse than living in constant fear. May the fears and tears hopefully abate and soon be non-existent, so that happiness and joy may be discovered and relished.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|A moving, tragic poem treating a universal theme. Thank you! Love and peace. Regis|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|A real fine piece penned here!!
Welcome to the Den!!
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
|We have to make sacrifices all along the road of life to be true to ourself
A fine and poignant poem
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|An amazing story you have committed to verse here, Pacific. My take on this was that they are running from an abusive husband/father. Their lives in shatters that they be able to exist at all. Very, very sad. Welcome to the Den. I look forward to reading more of your work.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Superb story/poem! G&E?;-)Welcome to the den!
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|A most captivating story poem, Pacific Ink.|
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|We all have fears; It's up to us, if we choose to let them imprison us or not.
Excellent story here.
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|What well-told story/poem this is! It can expand into a short story as well, with more to follow.
Wonderful beginning of a tale, though it's a sad beginning; but as Margaret Atwood said once - not all lives are beautiful, we gotta write about the happiness, and we gotta write about the sadness as well.
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Agnel :o)