Ying Yang
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Wednesday, July 27, 2005
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Problems up the ying yang,
attacking like a gang bang.
Problems up the ying yang,
got to fight the ring rang.
Problems up the ying yang,
need solutions to the sling slang.
Coming from the east crest,
attacking from wild west.
Peace have you seen her,
night times I do dream her?
Mornings get my prayers,
before I face the betrayers.
From this brain of thinking,
solutions I be inking,
forget dope and drinking.
Nothings more demeaning,
than hate and real meaning.
Slicing out stupidities curse,
problems won't get worse.
G
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
7/28/2005 |
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Ying Tong. Try that buddy boy.
Ying tong tiddle aye poe |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
7/27/2005 |
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Quite a twist on yin & yang,
Don't ya wish you had like rufuz a fang?
If you did you could outwardly hang,
Out of your pants that thang...?
What the hell am I saying herein?
I just got home from work at 2am,
Tired I must be, surely I the above must be a sin...sorry, LOL! Ed
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| Reviewed by Sandy Knauer |
7/27/2005 |
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Nice ;-)
I almost had to dance while reading this. |
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| Reviewed by Marilyn Seray |
7/27/2005 |
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| Excellent poem and message |
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| Reviewed by Sue Hess |
7/27/2005 |
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| ouch the ying yang...good poem |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
7/27/2005 |
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Outstanding!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
7/27/2005 |
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G,
I love the way you rap. Infectious little ditty that will be stuck in my head the rest of the day...you need to put this to music. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :) |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
7/27/2005 |
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Loved this Grady, your strong spirit is outstanding!
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
7/27/2005 |
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| excellent! :) |
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