Jamie's crying ( in progress) (poem) by Tony J. May Sr. on AuthorsDen

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Jamie's crying ( in progress) by Tony J. May Sr. Saturday, July 30, 2005 Rated "G" by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan Where does every event, circumstance, or hardship began, and "who" notices the drama of LIFE
Jamie's crying ************************ In the silence .. of .... The warmth of sun A gentle nudge Of morining ... Has just begun Witnessed by .. What must be ...the Love of God Caressed And then set free With ... Just a thought "Comfort and be with ... This ... child of mine ... Keep her... Hold her close Then, as she cries" "Echo and be heard On ... Every breeze ... Throught out all Creation ... And while she's ... On her knees" (Chorus) When ... she's crying! If..she's crying! I'm crying ... Jamie's crying!!! As she's crying! And she's crying! I'm crying ... Jamie's crying!!! Somewhere here and there Among the seasons .. Of it all Cold snow on winter evenings Summer rain and waterfalls Dark skies And stars devine Early morning dew ... No matter what we're facing No matter what we do (Chorus) When ... she's crying! If..she's crying! he is crying ... Because she's crying!!! If we're crying! As we're crying! He is crying ... Beside us crying!!! ��
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Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G	9/17/2005

This is such a beautiful song-- wonderful imagery too-Warmly,Sheee




Reviewed by Peter Paton	7/30/2005

God not only notices , but directs all the drama and destiny of our lifes A beautiful and heart rending composition Tony ! "Where does every event, circumstance, or hardship began, and "who" notices the drama of LIFE.. " Peter




Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie	7/30/2005

Oh, this is heart-breaking, excellently expressed, Reindeer