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Lambent Touch
by Chanti Niven

Saturday, August 13, 2005
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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I want to express how I feel but haven't tried
because words seem to be such empty containers
- like husk that is taken up by an idle breeze



I feel the touch of your lips upon my skin
The intensity of love in your eyes
I feel it through my closed lids
as I listen to the mesmerising sound of your voice
and we make love with our souls
Sighs slide from the corners of my eyes
My heart expands beyond the confines of my chest
I feel its steady drum - a primal beat
Love expressed in syncopated rhythm
our bodies playing out the tune

When you sleep I watch your familiar face
and trace the contours with a fingertip
- a lambent touch as soft as a thought
You stir. Perhaps I've touched your dreams
You inhale and my breath expands your lungs
My kiss lingers until you wake
and reach for me again...


 © Chanti    

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Reviewed by William DeVault 1/28/2006
I love that word. And it is well served by you and this work.
Reviewed by Pierre Ortega 9/5/2005
"A lambent touch as soft as a thought" Beautiful Pierre.
Reviewed by Cynth'ya cynthyaspeaks@gmail.com 8/15/2005
Girl don't you know I'm waitin' for my husband to heal up after his surgery? And you go and post a pic like this. . . (LOL) Yet the poem gives me somthing to keep the fires hot while he's under "reconstruction."

blessin's, glad I could stop by again,
cynth'ya
Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg 8/15/2005
gentle, sensuous, delightful
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger 8/15/2005
Chanti, there are no “empty containers” stored within the “vessel of love,” my gifted friend! This passionate piece exudes sensitivity, desire and has such enormous beneficial sensuality pouring across the page that one indeed would be filled to the brim with resurrection just to be held once again. It’s an outstanding creation. Thanks for sharing it. Take good care and be well.
Reviewed by Biri Amante (Reader) 8/15/2005
Not so...these "empty containers."
You have a very passionate nature, it seems, and a very romantic
way of expressing it.
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 8/15/2005
Very very lovely, this is so beautiful and romantic!

Reindeer
Reviewed by Huda Orfali 8/15/2005
Beautiful, soft and gentle poem
Well done, poet
love and peace
Reviewed by Masood Lohar 8/14/2005
"make love with our souls"

"Love expressed in syncopated rhythm
our bodies playing out the tune"

Indeed Chanti, that is the rhythem which has kept this troubled world and this miserable race alive. Making love with souls is an other beautiful stroke of your muse-brush which makes this poem a complete guideline for lovers. Very very impressive and romantic.

Masood
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 8/14/2005
sweet love flying, really a joy to read Chanti
Reviewed by Duke LaRance 8/14/2005
I certainly didn't detect any empty containers either -- this is so wonderfully expressive.... -- Duke
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 8/14/2005
Very romantic, Chanti! Beautiful new pic in your BIO!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by E T Waldron 8/14/2005
Chanti a soft touch, but a very deeply passionate sensuous feel
from soul to soul as it should be! Beautifully done!

Eileen
Reviewed by Sherry Heim 8/14/2005
WOW, Chanti, I can't imgine where you got the idea that your words would be empty containers? You express yourself and your feelings so very well. True it is that emotions are difficult to capture with language, but with your words you have painted the entire picture from the physical, spiritual and emotional aspects of love and wrapped them into a package that brings back to life feelings of past moments long forgotten.
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Sara Coslett 8/14/2005
This is a wonderful expression of deeply felt, and shared, love. Sighs sliding out of your eyes...yep, very powerfully felt love. ~ Sara
Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson 8/14/2005
A very beautiful and sensuous write, Chanti! I especially loved:

"You inhale and my breath expands your lungs
My kiss lingers until you wake
and reach for me again..."

Reviewed by Dale Clark 8/14/2005
A sensuous and passionate poem.
It's very beautiful Chanti!
Reviewed by jude forese 8/14/2005
beautiful, sensuous and smooth at expressing emotion ...
Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations 8/14/2005
This is gorgeous, deeply sensual, and yet, delicate. A poem like fire-coloured silk, Chanti.
Love&Light*
Alexandra*
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 8/13/2005
Did he use a condom? One just can't be to carefull yer know.
The AD Prodigal daughter..

BTW. Excellent poem Chantel, one can almost hear the couple as they couple. And the authors voice. Which is most clever..
Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga 8/13/2005
Dearest Chants,

"- a lambent touch as soft as a thought
You stir. Perhaps I've touched your dreams"---> absolutely stunning :)

A soft, delicate and loving write, yet so full of passion. Amazing how love can inspire the most exquisitely radiant thougths and expressions. Beautifully written as always Chants.

warm hugs and love
Elga
Reviewed by Tami Ryan 8/13/2005
So, so beautiful, Chanti. (sigh...)

I especially like this line:
"we make love with our souls"
for isn't that the way love should be?

Wonderful piece.

Hugs,
Tami
Reviewed by Jeff Mason 8/13/2005
Absolutely beautiful! Please keep sharing this type of intense and passionate work! -- Jeff
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 8/13/2005
Thank you for sharing the depth of your being, Chanti. Love to you always.

Regis
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 8/13/2005
Very deep soul write Chanti!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Mary Lynn Plaisance 8/13/2005
I love the deepness of your soul! Beautiful passion.
Reviewed by Felix Perry 8/13/2005
Chanti you created a masterpiece with this one. It whispers of love, romance and the promise of desire that will be consumated with your lovers awakening. The graphic although very erotic (got my juice flowing lol) is not necessary with this poem as the words are so perfect they make draw their own perfect image. Sweeeeeeet!
Hugs,
Felix
Reviewed by Roger Ochs 8/13/2005
Sweetly erotic with a soft touch of heat. Bravo.
Reviewed by Paul Williams 8/13/2005
Chanti
Your words are deeply moving and express the true depth of love within your soul.

Paul;-)



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