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| Reviewed by William DeVault |
1/28/2006 |
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| I love that word. And it is well served by you and this work. |
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| Reviewed by Pierre Ortega |
9/5/2005 |
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| "A lambent touch as soft as a thought" Beautiful Pierre. |
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| Reviewed by Cynth'ya cynthyaspeaks@gmail.com |
8/15/2005 |
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Girl don't you know I'm waitin' for my husband to heal up after his surgery? And you go and post a pic like this. . . (LOL) Yet the poem gives me somthing to keep the fires hot while he's under "reconstruction."
blessin's, glad I could stop by again,
cynth'ya |
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
8/15/2005 |
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| gentle, sensuous, delightful |
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| Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger |
8/15/2005 |
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| Chanti, there are no “empty containers” stored within the “vessel of love,” my gifted friend! This passionate piece exudes sensitivity, desire and has such enormous beneficial sensuality pouring across the page that one indeed would be filled to the brim with resurrection just to be held once again. It’s an outstanding creation. Thanks for sharing it. Take good care and be well. |
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| Reviewed by Biri Amante (Reader) |
8/15/2005 |
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Not so...these "empty containers."
You have a very passionate nature, it seems, and a very romantic
way of expressing it. |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
8/15/2005 |
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Very very lovely, this is so beautiful and romantic!
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Huda Orfali |
8/15/2005 |
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Beautiful, soft and gentle poem
Well done, poet
love and peace |
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| Reviewed by Masood Lohar |
8/14/2005 |
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"make love with our souls"
"Love expressed in syncopated rhythm
our bodies playing out the tune"
Indeed Chanti, that is the rhythem which has kept this troubled world and this miserable race alive. Making love with souls is an other beautiful stroke of your muse-brush which makes this poem a complete guideline for lovers. Very very impressive and romantic.
Masood
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
8/14/2005 |
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| sweet love flying, really a joy to read Chanti |
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| Reviewed by Duke LaRance |
8/14/2005 |
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| I certainly didn't detect any empty containers either -- this is so wonderfully expressive.... -- Duke |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
8/14/2005 |
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Very romantic, Chanti! Beautiful new pic in your BIO!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
8/14/2005 |
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Chanti a soft touch, but a very deeply passionate sensuous feel
from soul to soul as it should be! Beautifully done!
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
8/14/2005 |
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WOW, Chanti, I can't imgine where you got the idea that your words would be empty containers? You express yourself and your feelings so very well. True it is that emotions are difficult to capture with language, but with your words you have painted the entire picture from the physical, spiritual and emotional aspects of love and wrapped them into a package that brings back to life feelings of past moments long forgotten.
Take care,
Sherry |
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| Reviewed by Sara Coslett |
8/14/2005 |
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| This is a wonderful expression of deeply felt, and shared, love. Sighs sliding out of your eyes...yep, very powerfully felt love. ~ Sara |
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| Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson |
8/14/2005 |
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A very beautiful and sensuous write, Chanti! I especially loved:
"You inhale and my breath expands your lungs
My kiss lingers until you wake
and reach for me again..."
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
8/14/2005 |
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A sensuous and passionate poem.
It's very beautiful Chanti! |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
8/14/2005 |
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| beautiful, sensuous and smooth at expressing emotion ... |
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| Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations |
8/14/2005 |
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This is gorgeous, deeply sensual, and yet, delicate. A poem like fire-coloured silk, Chanti.
Love&Light*
Alexandra* |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
8/13/2005 |
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Did he use a condom? One just can't be to carefull yer know.
The AD Prodigal daughter..
BTW. Excellent poem Chantel, one can almost hear the couple as they couple. And the authors voice. Which is most clever.. |
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| Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga |
8/13/2005 |
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Dearest Chants,
"- a lambent touch as soft as a thought
You stir. Perhaps I've touched your dreams"---> absolutely stunning :)
A soft, delicate and loving write, yet so full of passion. Amazing how love can inspire the most exquisitely radiant thougths and expressions. Beautifully written as always Chants.
warm hugs and love
Elga |
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| Reviewed by Tami Ryan |
8/13/2005 |
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So, so beautiful, Chanti. (sigh...)
I especially like this line:
"we make love with our souls"
for isn't that the way love should be?
Wonderful piece.
Hugs,
Tami |
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| Reviewed by Jeff Mason |
8/13/2005 |
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| Absolutely beautiful! Please keep sharing this type of intense and passionate work! -- Jeff |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
8/13/2005 |
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Thank you for sharing the depth of your being, Chanti. Love to you always.
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
8/13/2005 |
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Very deep soul write Chanti!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Mary Lynn Plaisance |
8/13/2005 |
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| I love the deepness of your soul! Beautiful passion. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
8/13/2005 |
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Chanti you created a masterpiece with this one. It whispers of love, romance and the promise of desire that will be consumated with your lovers awakening. The graphic although very erotic (got my juice flowing lol) is not necessary with this poem as the words are so perfect they make draw their own perfect image. Sweeeeeeet!
Hugs,
Felix |
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| Reviewed by Roger Ochs |
8/13/2005 |
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| Sweetly erotic with a soft touch of heat. Bravo. |
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| Reviewed by Paul Williams |
8/13/2005 |
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Chanti
Your words are deeply moving and express the true depth of love within your soul.
Paul;-) |
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