My palace guard
by Denise Edwards
Tuesday, August 16, 2005
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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Just a whimsical write after reading a good book!
Bright crystal drops form on a bright green leaf
the smell of rain hanging heavy in the air
cool grass brush softly against my feet
as I walk along the trail that leads
to the myserious house on the hill
He will be there, standing as a sentinel guard
emotionless and still, yet I know he sees me
I can his heart beat, aping that of my own
His eyes beg me to wait, not to pass on by
with a smile, I let him know that no other
shall keep hold my interest, save he
With passion's emotion only, within our hearts
we plan our meeting among the green forest trees
we vision our hands held tight, as we watch the sun set
and our minds are filled with sweet kisses and promises
of a love that will complete us both
as we hold each other close
but only our eyes touch, the wind carries my kisses to you
once again, I must leave him standing there, waiting for me
but one day, our love will be fulfilled,
and I shall find endless happines in the arms
of my Palace guard!
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|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Inspirationally captivating, Denise. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace.
|Reviewed by Barbara Terry
|Whimsical romance yet to be felt. I love this. Thnx for sharing Denise. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, stubborn to a fault, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sad den sister, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, then I may as well be."
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Yes, you sure have been inspired! It's great when what we feast our minds on gives us so much... edifies, upbuilds, encourages, whatever: just sows beauty and richness into our lives in ways which will, in turn, give us something to pass on to others - in this case, the purity of a loving romance told in such a way that breathes with sincerity and feeling. TY Denise, this is refreshing. LOL Kate xx|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|What a freat write inspired by a bok! Beautifully written Denise!
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|It's wonderful when a good book inspires us, and this is a lovely passionate poem, Denise.|